All Comments on 'Valentine's Celebration'

by HottieKatie

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nakdsubnakdsubabout 11 years ago
Nice job

You could have used a little more romantic descriptions but it was a nice story.

She can be my Valentines date anytime.

betrayedbylovebetrayedbyloveabout 11 years ago
Ahhhhh

Love how its supposed to me. Must be a dream.

ythebadgerythebadgerabout 11 years ago
short and sweet

(perhaps a little too short) but pleasant enough.

Drbeamer3333Drbeamer3333about 11 years ago

Thanks for the offering. A very nice idea.

mat1014mat1014about 11 years ago
Superb!

Absolutely lovely!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
I wonder

Do you think that restaurant would be willing to set up a franchises?

I know a Mr. Anon who would love his wife to start a family business.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
they must be

sick where is all the other people the sickos need on this site to get off imagine just a husband and wife, sick,

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Sorry

Not enough plot to interest me. No doubt this would be great in real life, but reading a story about two consenting adults having sex, with no complications (such as cheating with consequences and heartbreak, for example) is just boring.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
We want married sluts.

Wrong category.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Damn right,

She should have given him his first cream pie, after she fucked the neighbor. God, some of these wives are so straight laced. Come on girls, lets have some real fun.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Nothing really special in this encounter

Isn't this the way a couple should behave on a regular basis?

Zed56Zed56about 11 years ago
Thanks Katie!

Nice read for a change. Short and sweet. Truly Loving Wives

GizmorGizmorabout 11 years ago
Valentine!

Just like it should be. Having a sex crazed WIFE that loves only you. Thanks.

LickideesplitLickideesplitabout 11 years ago
Sweet, but PLEASE edit!

Nice, sweet tale of TLW which generates NO tension. Author, please avail yourself of the FREE volunteer editor offer!! The errors in grammar were painful.

3*

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Nice job, author.

Easy to follow and for once a non-wimp LW story [rare].

katibkatibabout 11 years ago
Ugh

Is English your original language? Nice story spoiled by inept expressions.

chytownchytownabout 11 years ago
Very Sexy****

HOTT!!!!!! Thanks for sharing would not mind reading a few more like this one.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Super fuck

Loved it Katie! I wrote you a comment on your Earth Day submission and may have to retract that - I think YOU could teach ME a few things about fucking, sucking, and creampies - and there might be some we could learn together while in the process of ravishing each others bodies. Let's cum together sometime!

26thNC26thNCover 4 years ago
Good story

A little leery of these Valentine's day stories, but this was a good one.

homerman11209homerman11209about 4 years ago
Good story

Very cute and sexy

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