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HarryHillabout 11 years agoWas really into this
until the third line ... kinda fell apart after that with cheezy rhyme and stumbling cadence. Great title, great idea. no vote
Mo_B_Dickabout 11 years agoJust let me know when you're home...
And I'll spank the shit out of you on your daddy's bed.
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