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Secret Admirer

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous02/05/13

Overly Simplistic

The simple sentences, monosyllabic vocabulary and theme bludgeon of 'literotica story into actual event' didn't do it for me.

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by Lee201202/05/13

Ahhhhh

the excitement of anonymous, but hardcore sex. Very well written and begs for a follow.

Lee

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by MicKay02/05/13

Great story!

Sometimes a short story that sticks to the point is exactly what I need. Thanks!

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by Anonymous02/05/13

amazing

please continue...
this story is so intriguing.. i love how it keeps you waiting but not to like a maddening point like with some stories..

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by scotjock102/05/13

Continue This Hot Encounter

Good story mate, keep writing this series with the next installment. I loved it being simple in writing, I write in a similar fashion for ease, but also to describe things. Maybe in the next installment, her secret admirer takes her whilst she's on a busy train, or when she's sitting on a busy bus. He can do a bit more to her perhaps.

Great work! :D

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