All Comments on 'Kinky Secrets Ch. 24'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago

Loved it. Nice twist adding the other 2 and could really make this interesting. Turned a story that appeared to be coming to the end to one with a million possibilities. Keep up the good work.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
yes!

Keep going, I love the ideas, more permanent encasement and augmentation please.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago

More! Anxiously waiting for the next part!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
really looking forward to more.

Maybe her breasts could be enlarged too.really looking forward to more.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago

Will there be another chapter?

We need to find out what happens next!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
yes please

Please continue, it would be so much fun to hear what happens next

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago

Wow it's been forever since you added another chapter. I really hope this isn't the end. Please continue!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago

Hope this isn't the end ;-;

waiting for next Ch.25 <3

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago

Guessing there is no more v.v well that is a shame, thanks for the good read :)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Guess that's the end

Every day since Ch 24 came out I've checked for 25, guess it's run its course.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago

Still nothing......

oyvind1972oyvind1972over 10 years ago
Love it

This story series is the best i've read. And i've read more than a few. It is my first comment tho.

It is well written and captivating, and crazy funny. I realy hope for more of this story, and even other stories from you.

ShadowdvlShadowdvlover 10 years ago
so good

I've reread this story many times now, i keep wishing for an update and I do hope its coming soon. It's a well written piece and a very very good read

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Greatest story ever.

I read a few i recent time. But none were so well written as this one.

Keep on writing sequels to this story.

eagle122999eagle122999about 10 years ago
Since it's been a year...

Is it safe to say that this storyline is dead? Too bad, I was interested in seeing where it was going. Don't leave us hanging.

mrsmetoomrsmetooabout 10 years ago
what happens next?

It has been a year, I really want to know what happens next...please??

ShadowdvlShadowdvlabout 10 years ago
great story but are you going to finish it?

still waiting for new chapters, hope you are doing ok and your health is ok and that it's just life throwing you curve balls

NinjyouMacherNinjyouMacherabout 7 years ago
Permission for derivative work

Hello,

After reading this story, I'd very much like to continue it. I also, as a separate request, would like it if I could edit the existing chapters. For 1-23, I'd mostly just like to do some grammatical touching up as well as change the narrative perspective to third person, though my ideas for a continuation did require that I rewrite about half of chapter 24.

Pretty much, to summarize the changes, instead of Susan getting two new slaves, she twists the knife, so to speak, by forcing Perry to watch as Ann is stolen from him by Mary. Mary's delusion is deepened so that Susan can have Daddy "leave Mary for cheating". Mary and Ann's sexual escapades are actually in the half written chapter 25.

Please contact me one way or the other. I have the Chapter 24 edits ready if you would like to read them, and should have 25 done in a few days.

Ningyou Macher

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