All Comments on 'Charlie's Law'

I thoroughly enjoyed reading your story.

Thank you

close to being a well deserved 5*.

Unfortunately a few errors, which a bit more proof reading would have eliminated, let it down.

Much of the stories here seem to be produced by functional illiterates. Yours is an exception. Stimulating, and an enjoyable read. No reason why erotica should'nt be both.... As I am both a professional musician and a lover of elegant, articulate, sexually free, and clearly superior women (average just won't do), you rang all my cherries. Thank you.

"Many" of the stories, not "much"! Thus proving my point.... it's easy to overlook grammatical errors when you're turned on! Thanks very much.

A clever story, well-told.

It was the ending that made it really Good!

HP

Quite a twist

A dream come true.......a late night knock at your door from the "Lady" might make another great story.

a disgusting, perverted, deviant shit of a story.

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Well done tale.