All Comments on 'Enjoying the Drive Ch. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago

how are the rents not going to catch on?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Mmmmmmm!

Scorching Hot! 5 for Me!

larry74403larry74403about 11 years ago
A 5 star entry to this story.

Keep up the great work.

Daniel32Daniel32about 11 years ago
Even better!

The sister reminds me of my twin sis and how much we were at each other's throats before the sexual tension bubble went pop along with our cherries. ;)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Yummie!

I love the tension and detail in your words and I just came all over my fingers. Now I have to find a way to get my younger brother to show me his cock; maybe I'll flash him sneek peeks of my hairless pussy.You get me so worked up with your stories I get tired doing myself and gotta get a taste of something stronger.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Wicked

Keep up that fantastic work

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
To: Anonymous "Yummie"...

Wished to hell I had a sister like you!!!!!!!!

dutch513dutch513about 11 years ago
gotta love it !

very good story ! you are three for three ! keep going and I will keep reading ! thanks for the good work!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Too short...

Need more incidents per chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
write more

Great series, cant wait for the next chapter

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Nice!!!

you read this and at the end you keep wanting more. try to include mom in the next chapter if u can. good series.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
amazing

i am loving these stories... i hope the trip is a long one and there are a lot more episodes

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
good story so far

I don't normally leave comments, but this is a great series! I am thoroughly enjoying it, and hope for more...i don't recommend adding mom into the mix, that just makes it too much of a fantasy. I recommend keeping on this track as it could actually happen, but hey that's your job. Great job

-$teventhegre@t

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Excellent!

Keep it up, longer chapters, and keep mom and dad out of it...it is perfect just the way it is!

rightbankrightbankover 9 years ago
I worked in Yellowstone and Grand Teton

and know how little privacy you have in those public showers. and that there are clearly segregated facilities for men and women with privacy entrances. yes, it is fun to visualize this scene, but, in reality, not gonna happen.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

OK, that was an awesome chapter! I didn't know they had pay showers, lol. You'd think they would be free with the pay campsite! I like the double curtain thing! That could be fun!! I'll have to remember that if we ever go! Hehe.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

No comment from 6 years :(

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I’m listening to hair rock right now, and your attitude for the greatest music of the last 50 years ashames me.

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Good story. However the idea that they'll have a 3 day driving trip from Montana to Orlando is a little unrealistic if they're already stopping in Yellowstone for the first night! Lol!

Luvumboth13Luvumboth1322 days ago

Fucking great story I could almost see Dani you made her so hot I'll be looking for more of your stories

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