....then they met some aliens....? That was random but hard to picture. Anyhow, the story was written in an interesting style (short paragraphs), keep experimenting.
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Abrupt end, but keep writing.
....then they met some aliens....?
That was random but hard to picture.
Anyhow, the story was written in an interesting style (short paragraphs), keep experimenting.
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