All Comments on 'Still the Boss'

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Mc1sucksMc1sucksabout 11 years ago
Loved it!

The details of the office environment were very good, made the whole story more familiar and intense for me. Really enjoyed the tension between Nina and Tory. Great stuff, keep them coming!

BahamaBahamaabout 11 years ago
Wow

That was hot ! Please continue

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
No testing?

I worked in IT for over 30 years, and for any major system, or even significant change, to go into production without live testing is preposterous.

Janice1939Janice1939about 11 years ago
Testing is a must!!!

Testing is a must!!!

All of life is a test. It is a pitty I learned it far to late. Axcepting that my husband could make me pregnant but never satisfied me fully. No matter what! Having threesomes with his brother, or another male friend never truly satisfied me. Oh the men all did! As if they were masturbating in my vagina. It wasn't untill one faithfull evening his young female secretay came to play. Possibly so she could snag my husband, were they both wrong. She moved in and my husband lived his life out in the spare bedroom. While us as old biddies never had any sexual complaints ever, after our first night at any time.

Love Janice

JendehJendehabout 11 years ago
I really liked this

Great fic and I really hope to see more lesbian fic out of you. Actually wouldn't mind seeing a continuation to this story cause it seems like there is a lot of fire there. Can't imagine that it ends here ya know? Whether its these two characters or different ones I'd really love to read more of your writing. You seem to really have a talent for writing that really hot angry passion between two characters. More soon please!

leann5redleann5redabout 11 years ago
grate story

hope your going ot right more like this .Maybe a ch2 what would be good. ty love leann xxx

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Great story

Well written and very hot!

deliciousthoughtsdeliciousthoughtsabout 11 years ago
loved...

I loved both your uncompromising writing style and the delicious story itself :)

I'm definitely looking forward to reading more of your work x

2275jr2275jrabout 11 years ago
wow what a very hot horny story

love this story as well as the brilliant writing of it . reading this was a real turn on . their nothing better an to read about the way two hot horny women make love better than any man could to a woman . love this story hope their going to be more part of tis one still the boss.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago

It's well done, but there's no real explanation for Nina suddenly jumping on Tory and more or less raping her, or for Tory's acceptance of Nina's power at the end. Both things happen more or less out of the blue.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Sequel?

Would like to know what happens to these two after this, it feels like there is a lot of room to develop this story!

germanchocolate4ugermanchocolate4uover 9 years ago
I'm in Love

I am in love with this story. It reminds me of two walruses on animal planet battling for dominance and control of the harem, in this case the recruitment department. For now, the reign is still held by the "old guard." Can't wait to see what happens next.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
A bit implausible

Well written as are your other tales but I thought the plot a bit implausible. Oh, the office politics rang very true but Nina's sudden launching herself at Tory seemed a bit implausible. And if Nina had been Frederick, this would have simply been a rather unpleasant rape story. You can do a lot better than this.

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