by chocolatecookie3
Good job. I liked the dialogue, it was believable and realistic, and flowed very nicely. Keep writing, you'll be a powerhouse with time.
Next time make him seem less submissive...or was he just going along for the ride?
Loved everything about it - this from a white guy married to (and crazy about) a black woman. Forbidden fruit is so much sweeter... :)
I found this a lovely little romance. I think it was kind of nice that he was the shy one. Hope he gets his act together, but you will never be shy. You brought back some fond memories of a slightly different version of forbidden fruit.
You should take the truck in at least for a tire rotation.
I'll be looking for more.
I was in my twenties and she was 11 years older than me. We met during church related activities and hung around socially which progressed to long phone calls then to phone sex. Then came our first meeting together outside in the woods that came right up to her backyard. Over a year we spent as lovers with many additional wooded trysts as well as in my car (VW van), at her home when other family members were away, in my barracks room, and other locations that have faded in memory of events 40 years ago with my Forbidden Fruit, Linda. Thank you for your good memories inducing story. 5* -Lejeau (my Lit ID)
I loved every delicious word of this yummy story!
Mmm,so the white loves your 'homemade' pie eh;)
I could only dream of eating a piping hot,piece myself(blackberry is my favorite)
⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️'s for this and Please continue with these two.
I grew up in the South where getting a piece of black pussy was like a right of passage to young white boys. However, that was one treat I missed out on...too bad for me. I enjoyed your story. It brings back memories of things I thought about a lot but was never able to enjoy. However, from my youth I remember the "big boys" always talking about black pussy and saying "Fuck a duck, screw a guinea, ni??er pussy is as good as any". And as I have gotten older I find out that the white girls have found that BBC makes their pussies feel very good.