Where Do I Know You From?

A very interesting story, where you have the woman agree to allowing nude photos of her in a motel room with a stranger and even later meetings for the same thing, but you did not have the characters engage in sex. They are both married and are attracted to each other, but the relationship does not go any further? I must admit that this seems a bit unlikely to happen in the way you describe, but what do I know.

You did not discuss the possibility that her husband, or friends might find out about the pictures and it would seem that would be a major concern. The size of her city is also not brought into the story line and that would seem to be an important factor.

WOW!

Amanda, what a story! It is very well written without the usual spelling and punctuation mistakes.

I sincerely hope to read more from you very soon! Thank you for sharing.

Ernie

Good first effort Amanda

I think Sydney is being overly analytical with his comments, this was a good story concept and I really enjoyed it.

so good!

Amanda, I really enjoyed that. Not having them have sex was a major thread of the story. Your attention to detail was great. And thanks for the clean grammar and punctuation. A very believable story.

A

Intriguing debut

Although I agree with Sidney43 that Clara seemed curiously unconcerned that her husband would find out about her photoshoot, I disagree that the lack of sexual contact between her and Roger was unlikely: she was exploring an aspect of her own sexuality, sparked by his unexpected approach. I found the scenario extremely titilating, and you handled the development (particularly Clara's inner dialogue and their external conversation) very well. Do you plan telling us about the outdoor session? Whichever, your future contributions will be most welcome.

Thank you

I enjoyed your story.