by paradisetitty
love this story - very likeable characters - can't wait to see how the story continues
The description of their first kiss is one of the most sensual things I've ever read, the build up of the girls's hopes and fears is terrific. This story is a miniature erotic masterpiece, it stands as a perfect jewel as it is... if you do decide to continue their story, you've set yourself a very high challenge to live up to... Thank you
Damn tht was hot!!! Leaving us hanging is not fair though, please write da next chapter soooon....
That was the start of a beautiful story, !!.
A young lady leaving behind her adolescence, Living with a crush for her beautiful lady teacher, Planning a seduction, then facing doubts about having the courage, ?.
Their MUST be, another long 2nd instalment, --- Pretty Please, !!!.
One of the most astonishing stories that I've ever read. It filled me with such sudden wonder. Your writing is soulful, please continue, be it a new chapter or a whole new story. Just keep on writing, with the same themes.
Please write a new chapter to this awesome story soon! Very entertaining! One of the best stories I've read in a long time.
Please update soon! This is one of the best stories that I have read on here. You are an excellent writer. Keep up the good work.
Alright you need to finish this because this left me eager and sodden!!!
Fuckk!!!!! That was incredible!!! Please please PLEASE update soon!!!
Well written and quite compelling, with a strong erotic tension throughout. It occurs to me that a great screenplay nearly jumps out of this story; I can see the video in my mind. Looking forward to the next chapter...
Please write more about these two
Anglea
Shyangel_63@yahoo.co.uk
I can't wait until you finish your story. I can only hope that you write another chapter and include the most important thing. Miss Sullivan taking Amy's virginity would be a really good ending to a dam good story. Hope that you can use it to finish the story. I am waiting and hoping that you do. As always. Betsy C
Omg I have a crush on a teacher whose name is miss Sullivan too :0 omg this sounds like my fantasies too lol :D
I sooo enjoy a story that takes the time necessary to unfold and open accordingly (no pun intended). And, in this instance, a story which closely replays an event from my life some years ago.
Excellent read.
The story made this woman wet and... the lead up to the kiss very exciting and descriptively sexy.
Jesus that's a good story one the best on this site from what I've seen please finish
Too bad there wasn't another chapter. Had so much more potential. Anyway, it was sensually erotic. Yum.
This was just getting to the juicy stuff and now there's no more. It's been three years already. Hopefully paradisetitty is okay. Please please write a conclusion to this erotic story.
I've returned to this story several times, hoping that there'd be another chapter up. There's a lot of potential here; it's really well written!
This is such an amazing story it got me going so well it's wonderfully written I would love to see how they "finish what they started" it's so so close to absolute perfection it just needs that finish
I am beginning to get the feeling that there might never be a part two and that you are just leaving us all on a cliffhanger. Though a cliffhanger preserves the quality of the writing, resolving the tension would make the story much more enjoyable to read. Please Please Please Please add an ending to this wonderful writing.
O_O This is getting good I really hope this gets continued I rate this 5 stars! Keep up the good work! :)
I'm tempted to say story..but that doesn't do this succulent piece any justice. It's like someone peeped into my head and beautifully articulated one of my fantasies. As others who've commented before, please please continue this story. Love. A
I am glad you ended with `for now..' as I have to know what happens between Amy and her ex-teacher! Will Amy learn the 'ins-and-outs' of same-sex lovemaking from an expert, or is Ms. Sullivan actually as CONFUSED by the situation as her former student seems to be? Please inform us as to their future!!!
Its been 5 years and you never finished the story?
Now September 2020, the 2nd chapter has never been written. Obviously, you just imagine what Amy and Charlene do after school.. maybe never do or maybe parents caught her getting off her former teacher’s car as parents were on way home.. many different thoughts!!!
Absolutely a great story of "lust" and "desire, between both the teacher and the pupil. It really would be great to read more chapters on the follow-up. "PLEASE"
Wow.... Just wow... Feels a bit like a cock tease(ironic since it's 2 chicks) and I was getting ready to stroke my cock when Charlene and Amy were starting their affair. Cannot WAIT for it to continue at Charlene's house. Maybe with a strap on inclusion???
I love it!!!!! I have to know where this goes!!! Please do chapter 2!!! I gotta know!!! That was hot!!!
You are one of the crowd that believes that as a lesbian author, you MUST put small breasts on at least one of your lesbians - - it makes them less appealing, less attractive, less desirable. Right? That is the way so many of you lesbian authors write. It is all part of your dysfunction in trying to belittle and degrade lesbians - - as if the teacher (in your story) would have been any less if she had normal-sized breasts. Yep, for you and your lesbian-author crowd, small breasts to demean a lesbian is the agenda, right!!? I'm sticking up for my sister and her lesbian friends - - they encounter your types everyday of their lives. Believe me, you are really AVERAGE!!
Lovely story
Exciting, not at all average
My GF and I read the story together and we both enjoyed and related to the story.
Thank you for writing.
Don't worry about what the last comment idiot wrote, obviously someone who pretends to be open and caring, but actually is a lesbian hater. I'm surprised such vicious comments would be allowed to be posted
I really need another part to this…it was beautifully written and so sensually sexy! Hot hot hot!!!