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erectus123erectus123about 11 years ago
nicely done

but don't stop with a kiss, that's where you start or does your "entered" mean more than arrival?

lonelyhousewife32lonelyhousewife32about 11 years ago

how romantic! This piece makes me feel like these two are meeting clandestinely for a kiss...it's beautiful.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago

Love this! Beautiful. ~ S

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