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Quivering_QuillQuivering_Quillabout 11 years ago
A Lascivious Pet?

I did enjoy the poem as it has a nice flow to it and a well penned story line.... Must agree that Pellucid, although a nice word, might be better being something like lascivious, salacious, or even precocious... Nicely done...

demure101demure101about 11 years ago
It makes one wonder

about the quality of thoughts...

Lovely.

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I enjoy caring relationships with quiet, polite, women with open minds and good senses of humour, be it in a longer-term arrangement or just a one off. If you are up for it, I will engage in daddy-ply, d/s play, impact play and other sensual games. Definitely not into hurti...

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