All Comments on 'She-Male School: A Teacher Seduced'

To bad you can't finish a story before starting a new one and because of that I will not be reading any more of your stories. Once you do finish the three you said you would finish I'll start reading again and I will give you a poor rating on each one I see you write.

The story is very hot, and the premise good, and your sex scenes are just fantastic. The foreshadowing is overplayed, but you seemed to be going for that specifically so I guess that could just come down to taste. It looked like you may be planning on bringing in males in the next chapter: I would prefer you wait on that personally, I think there's a lot you can explore with just the characters you've set up here. Again, extremely hot writing, and it kept me reading even after coming a couple times.

The story line was GREAT. Took abit to long to get to the sex, which is why most of us are here, to read and jerk off. Yet the details were wonderful, you really are a great writer. I would love to see more tg stories from you.

Love it so much. Absolutely amazing. Thank you.

As an author I try to write a variety of works of fiction.... Mixing new pieces of work with sequels. That said, sequels are more difficult to write than actual new stories as the plot is already developed and plot twists are challenging, Also I get daily requests for both new and sequels. In your insulting critique of me, you don't even mention which of my stories you want finished.

I do have sequels coming this year...but as mentioned, they are very challenging to write.

Jasmine

I enjoyed your story. Contrary to a few of the others, I liked that you did not just jump to sex and set the story up well. The lead in, the way your characters mind built up her fantasy to have it climax the way it did. You wrote a story, you did not just write porn. Thank you, and waiting for the next chapter..and I will be reading more of your stories.

Not your usual story of a Canadian teacher taking employment with a private school. Step by step she enters her new position as she struggles with her submissive nature.

When the sex begins it is a no holds barred adventure into a world of T-girl and/or dick-girls. The author stars in this erotic passage that cums to a orgasmic conclusion. (Sorry there were only 5 stars available to select)

This story took me three tries to finish, I hope you know why it would take three attempts, but after finishing 11 pages I have come to realize it was not long enough. This story has limitless potential for growth and I would love to read more, as well as many of your other stories, but this one was wonderful. Please write another one using option five that Ms. Jasmine spoke of to Mistress Nichole or more on the food chain. I would love to see her fall to another student/students. I don't know if you have the energy or desire but if anything lingers please get us another installment soon.

FC52

Gorgeous, kept me busy for the evening honey. ;-)

Michelle

Stunningly different. Well done. A bit of a time problem to read straight thru but I couldn't stop turning the chapters.

Thanks Don

I really enjoyed this story. A little more Meta then what I've come to for erotica but it was a nice addition to the story. Loved the inclusion of the Innocent Dickgirls characters. Look forward to seeing what you do next.

I can't put enough praise in this comment. This is the first story of yours that I've read but I will definitely be looking up the rest of your stories.

I loved your story luv......................i couldnt do it in one go but that wasnt a big problem as i just had more than one cum!!!!!!!!!!

I luv your nylons fetish................i too luv sucking nylon covered toes..................so fucking erotic........................Andrew

This is the first story of this genre that I've ever read. I really hope u plan to write a sequel to this! Awesome work

Transsexual University teaches "Sex Ed" in a scorching nylons soaked environment. Teachers Pet obeys "her" tutor in a nice way. Class: Being the perfect little school slut for the faculty. "Vice" Principal gets "her" way with young teachable virgins willing to make the grade. "GOOD GIRLS"! Now, everyone ready? "I hope all your little "pussy/penises" are nice are wet and stiff. All wet?, good. "Take the nice little cunt next to you and lick each other well." Teacher, what about you? Said one pussy pupil. "Ill be instructing on proper pussy procedure" Pull down your pantyhose or lick the pussies though the wet pantyhose. "Good, don't come just yet." All be around to taste all the nice sweet nectar of your individual "pussies". Yes teacher, all exclaimed excitedly. The sexual ed professor and "vice" principal taught each new sweet young student the proper way to fill the teachers sucking mouth with sweet juices. Yummy! "That was fun professor"! The teach said: Alright, tomorrow a special treat! How to take wet cunt and insert your new toys inside.....

Normally I'm not a big fan of T-girl stories, but wow! You really out did yourself with this tale (tail?). Spectacular.

silk,

Your story is extremely hot and has just the right amount of tease. While its length may be a turnoff to some, I appreciate the need to prepare a proper background. All good things to those who wait.

Thank you,

babasluv

That was a very hot story, I do hope you're planning sequels.

I have always enjoyed shemale stories but have never enjoyed one quite as much as I did this one.

At first 11 pages made me sigh, but once it was done I was like I wish there was more.

Thanks for a riveting read and I pray there is more to CUM in this one!!!

loved the story!!

Wow. This is a truly Fantastic story. There is so much more that can be done with the world you've created. I hope this is not the last we will of this Wonderful school. I would love to read more about the headmistress.

that was an excellent story.. hopefully, just a beginning!! please, oh please write more on this little world you created. i loved this story!

That is by far the horniest story I have ever read here or anywhere else. Well done and "keep it up". I'll definitely be back for more. X

"This story took me three tries to finish,..."

LOL. Would you be surprised to know I had the same problem! It is a little slow to develop, but it's all worth it in the end.

I loved the story, even though it developed slowly, the suspense and anticipation had me riveted. I hope you continue the story line and tell of how the Head Mistress teaches her new slave, and of how she deals with her nice/nephew's actions!

Finally a story with a followable plot, interesting characters, and vivid scenes. Please continue!!

please keep writing this story I want to know what happen next and how Nicole and Alex keep using their new slave

Hi all,

This was my favourite story to write and I would love to dive back into these characters (pun intended).... That said, not sure where I should take the story next...

Any ideas?

Jasmine

I'm not one for reading long stories but I have a recent fascination with real shemale girls. I was totally engulfed in your story, reading the whole story at one sitting. The imagination became vivid in my mind. Would love to see this in a movie version. Please continue with this one. I'm sure Penelope would like to cont. what she started. And theres got to be more students involved with dirty deeds... with other teachers ? This was just fukin' HOT ! Thanks , HDbiker

First off I'm going to say that I did enjoy the story and I thought the sex scenes were hot, the plot was interesting, the characters well developed. Certainly a cut above the average story posted on here.

That being said, I did have some problems. For starters- I'm going to preface this by saying I haven't read any of your other stories so if this is part of your style, I'm unaware, but I found the story to be way too meta. Might just be me but I find it takes me out of the story when I'm constantly being reminded it's a story because it's constantly being pointed out that the main character of the story is an author on literotica.

Secondly, I found the story to be a little too self-congratulatory. You're a very talented writer. I'm sure you're often told you're a very talented writer. In fact just about every comment on this story seems to be saying what a talented writer you are. That being said, when the main character of your story is blatantly you, and every other character goes out of their way to tell the main character what a great writer they are, it feels a little too much like, well, I suppose this is silly considering this is an erotica story, but it comes off as masturbation. This really ties back into the meta/framing device thing. We don't need the constant reassurance that the main character really is a good writer, when the main character is you and we can obviously see that you are a good writer by reading what you've written.

Again, I enjoyed the story, I just felt these two elements were unnecessary and detracted from it rather than added to it.

cant wait for part 2, keep doing what doing its good

I absolutely enjoyed the story, and I looked forward to the 11 pages. Clearly, I am not the typical reader in this category. (I wish transvesites were separate, but that's another topic.) While imperfect, I wanted to say "thank you" for writing in this category.

I read your story a few days ago, and came back to explore a few of your other works. Even in a microcosm, some writers and/or works will not appeal to you; but I enjoyed your work, and I will definitely read more from you.

I was surprised and impressed by your writing's diversity and proficiency. I applaud your efforts and would like to reiterate the point that written porn is not the same as erotic literature. I'll end by saying that submission is nother for me, but your presentation does make it sound erotic! Again, I'll definitely be reading more stories (including exploring other authors)!

Looking forward to more!

i am so excited that a few authors are finally telling tales of she-males with women. i don't care for the stories of she-males with men. i love a well told tale of lesbian she-males.

Wow, that may have been the best story I've ever read here.

Just saw another commentor saying this one one of the best stories they have seen on the site, and I have to agree! Whilst l have had thoughts about submission and she-males, neither subject is top of my list of likes really, but your story was just staggeringly wonderful. I'm not usually a fan of the longer stories but was gripped from start to finish, and I'm looking forward to reading more of your work... still rock hard here minutes after finishing.

Thanks sooo much!

Easily the best story on this site. Sexy, suspenseful and full of hot sex. Please more she-male stories

My mind. All over the keyboard. This story. Damn. So good.

one hot sex story starte to finsh im a she male and love howe tell the story its about as real as it can get PLS write more like it yours leann xxxxx mawh

What a tale you weave. Simply awesome. Love your work. Would love to see a second chapter continuing with teachers and staff. Thanks again.

I thought your story was done with great taste, erotic, exotic thoughts of seduction, submission and intense feelings.

Wow ... I have been reading stories online since literotica started but never have I read such a well-thought out story...sure the sex was hot, but the character development and putting yourself in the story put it over the top...

Did I mention...wow!!!

What a fantastic story, I am sure I will re-read this often.

Words cant describe how amazing this story is. Im a 38 year old teacher and this has filled my thoughts in class

I spent all day reading this story and felt great all the way through. I was glad Alexis got in first but I did expect the full on orgy to happen at the end. I know Jasmine would happily take on all comers anyway but I'd love to see her forced a bit more against her will. Maybe Alexis punishes her and ties her up somehow but then reveals she knew what Nicole was doing all along and videos the whole sex scene with Jasmine and the class, her taking 5 cocks at a time, lots of cum etc...

I maybe a guy but certainly a T-girl at heart :)

I have never really read a submissive story before but this had me completely glued the writing so inventive and the dedication to detail surely you must be a novellist.

Thank you very much for sharing this story

What a Great Story ! Loved it :) I have read several of your stories and enjoyed many but so far I like this one best ! Thank you :)

Can you add more pages Plz it's amazing

This story is the best I have ever read in the genre. Wow and wow and wow again!!! Gawd, it kept me hot and bothered all the time, imagining myself being the teacher. My, how delicious. That was the first story I have ever read by you but I am definitely going to check on other stories of yours.

Just one little detail. I was surprise to find quite a few typos. Never the less it didn´t take away anything from the hot read.

thank you

REALLY GREAT STORY,HOPE YOU CONTINUE IT.

It has been soooo long since I've had time to read one of your long stories. Sometimes I appreciate the Chapter-by-chapter approach, moreso lately, but there are times I want to settle down and just sink into the fantasy. Thanks for filling my need... yet again.

You know I love your writing, well, your exquisite storytelling. I revel in knowing a character's thoughts... misgivings... yearnings, and that instant when they let go. Mmmm. You've always nailed that. --The puns are just writing themselves, here, I promise--

As usual, thank you for sharing your gifts with us. Please keep writing.

All I can say is "Wow!" I love the slow, detailed, build-up and would absolutely love to see the story continue. Maybe down the road there could be an addition of a male teacher??? Anyway, great story and I look forward to reading some of your other works.

i would love to be taken just like the scenes in the story. Great story and very hot!!!

Such a hot story. This school, staff, student body and faculty needs to be explored in future stories. I would love Nicole to be shown by Alexis who is in charge . Also, I would like to see Jasmine and Penelope service a group of students. Just suggestions of course as I really loved these characters.

I have read this story over and over and was hoping you would go futher with the stiry about what happens after Nicole.

A big fan you can email me at Daddykanebiggen@yahoo.com would love to see more stories like this and more on this one.

Such an amazing story, not just the sex scenes but the plot as well, really loved it and hope you will write another

Great story! And, undeniably, begging for a sequel! ;) The possibilities you opened up with this story are virtually endless.... good job!

This is the best shemale story I have ever read. Have you thought of writing a hermorphidite story a dom female with a cock and a sweet pussy.

Amazing story.. waiting for the sequel pf this story.. cant wait to read nicole lisa reika and other girls takin on jasmine together! Fucking her cunt ass nd mouth !!!

continue writing loved it

The plot was intriguing, the grammar was... passable, and the sex scenes were steamy. A good tale all-around - may want to study up a bit more on English grammar.

This story, like all your others, was excellently written. I loved how you incorporated so many of your other works into the story. If you could create a story to showcase all of your stories, this would be it. Keep writing, keep entertaining.

~Anon

You are a PRO. I'm searching for ispiprations about how to be a good Mistress and you are providing me so many ideas ...

Love

Marta

Awesome, really loved your story. They should make a movie about it! Plz keep the story going!

Excellent over-top-story. 'You' make a very interesting, 3d character. A really enjoy your stories, but some feel hurried. This one is nicely polished. Thanks for sharing.

Loved this Story. I have Fantasized about being Dominated by a Shemale with Beautiful Legs and Gorgeous Feet. Excellent writing as You build up the Fantasy over time. The Foreplay is Overwhelming. Thanks...

I couldn't stop reading this fantastic tale.

I couldn't stop stroking myself until I came multiple times.

I wish I could have this adventure myself. Want to be controlled.

Need a nylon clad long legged beauty of a she male to worship

Some writers can write good stories while real authors produce really good stories. Silkstockingslover is a superior Author who Creates exquisite material many writers might even aspire to achieve. I hope they read and learn what the great ones achieve on a regular basis.

I'm usually not interested in the realm of fiction in regards to what I just read, since it would never happen. But I cannot deny that were it to become reality...well shit, talk about a confused sexuality now xD.

found your story absolutely fantastic!, i was wet with pre-cum myself almost from the beginning. i simply could not stop. in my mind i was constantly changing my fantasy from being Mistress A, Miss Jasmine, Miss Penelope or Miss Nicole. wow, i am still trembling with the passion you aroused in me. thank you

i hope you write a sequel. warmest regards

rhiann

As for Trans stories go, I have to admit this was the best story I have ever read!! As an M2F myself, I still couldn't help but feel the total desire and fulfillment of Ms. Jasmine. Incredible!

Very few authors can write so well that the reader can visualize every detail going on while fully immersing themselves in the story. This story had me hook, line, and sinker to the point that I was practically hard as concrete and dripping precum everywhere by the time any action took place.

Never read a story like this one loved it. can you point some more.

ronpn@yahoo.com

I really hopefull you'll continue this. Or an other dickgirl-female story!

I wish I could be a student there, I could be such a submissive shemale slut ! Or work three with orders to service the girls whenever requested !

wow is all i can say

I couldn't stop reading the story. Wonderfully provacitive!

This story will be come known as .."SHE-MALE HEAVEN", and it's not boring I thought that Jasmines' meeting with Headmistress Alexis was an invitation to dismissal. But it proved to be an invitation of acceptance with open arms....allowing Jasmine to drop the curtain of secrecy and be herself. We also learn the identities of "MistressA and TransNikki.

The story deals with both suspense and SEX......An X-MEN version with hidden dicks,

powerful dicks, sexy dicks. An all that it entails, i.e., intelligent and reasonable conversation. Whatever one might think of this subject , it is, nonetheless, a serious and real problem in our society. It can also be seen as a tail of entertainment.

The story is not only plausible, but interesting....not your typical "Wham-bam-thank you-ma'am" sex story...says the author. A sequel would be tempting!!

I enjoyed this story so much. I found myself getting both irritated or frustrated with every page I read. Knowing that there were less pages to go but utterly transfixed on getting to the next page. Now I have a attraction to Tgirls, Transgeder, Middlesexed, and I consider myself a straight\trans curious guy. I wish I was a well funded movie producer. I would try my damndest to get this on the big screen. Yes it's over the top bet your writing makes it so easy to go along with this story. For me it does not insult the intellect of feeling the need to reason how probable this could ever happen. It's a great fantasy that pulls you in. Your setup is so important to creating the characters in my mind. So you create a story about a she-male prep school with a rich history involving political intrigue As if these young Tgirls will really rule the world. I so dig it. It got me thinking of the Skull and Crossbones at Harvard. Or some other cryptic all men's fraternity of well to do young en who are destined for great things. I just entertained the idea with a bit of a twist. One note, in the grand scheme of this piece. I thought the name of the school was a bit lame.It just seemed a bit lackluster to the concept of this academic academy. call me weird but there it is. Bravo and I will add you to my favourites. Those Literotica reference in the story. Are those real or added for substance. I would like to know.

You've seen the Innocents Dickgirl pages?

Yes,

She-male school was inspired by the dickgirl pages.

I have read quit a few stories you have written and each one has been equally good. And each one had me equally turned on. But this....this went to a whole other level. Awesome story!

I just wish there was the classroom orgy that was her third fantasy.

Ms Jasmine that was by far the most erotic story I have yet to read and makes me want to have sex with a she-male so bad but as yourself I am very hesitant to stray from my heterosexual marriage and try a new adventure. But this may just push me over the edge I dream of sucking tits ass and cock.

Thank you, sincerely hornybicuriousmale45.

With all the possibilities you left open, why not continue this into a series? Maybe where she gets used by the teachers? Or different girls in the senior class have one on one time with her? Or maybe that threesome with Nicole and Lisa? Just a few ideas from a fan

I never thought of such an exciting situation.. please continue as there is so much more to tell... I do hope that such an isolated school becomes only fun and not needs at all.. that we all can live being who we are in all aspects of our lives

please write the next part to the story I would love to find out how Headmistress Alexis and Nicole cont. to use you in the story it is one of the best I have ever read

Yes, you have piqued our taste for more of reading and looking at the use of Ms, Jasmine being used and used some more. I need to read of her being used in the glory hole and sucking one after another and being used at both ends at same time by one after another as you hinted of. Let all her mistresses use and abuse her time and time again, also tell about a she-male being fucked maybe while sucking another or being fucked while also fucking. So many possibilities, but do give us more.

great story love you writing style cant wait for the second chapter

You presented this work, in such a believable way that I found myself wishing I was a male teacher there. As a male teacher at the school, one of the conditions to working there was to ALWAYS be ready and willing to accept one of the girls into whichever hole they wanted regardless of when and where. That being said **I AM VERY GRATEFUL** that you remained true to the story and there were no guys in the story! Really liked this one!!!!!

Great story! One of my favourites on this site. Would have loved some more detailes of what happens between Nicole and the other students aswell. And between the principal when she calls them to her office. Maybe something between Nicole and the principal? Great job anyway. Loved it

Greetings dear friend, I read all your story (all 11 parts), Your story it's very awesome and very hot. Will you write a new sequel or there is already another sequel?

I have read several of your stories, I love TS ladies I love their cocks, I loved your slow sexy journey through this story.

My silkstockingslover marathon continues. And each time I read another one of your stories I seem to say this is the best one. I have to once again say this is the best one. I think it will be hard to find better than this though. 10 stars! The plot and character development is great. You don't need to apologize for anything regarding the length and set up.

Please continue with another instalment. I would love to see the Japanese girl dom Jasmine. So often you see asian characters submissive (Asian transgender girls can be dominant and hung. If you want proof Google Asian ladyboy Jasmine) I know it would be great to show how wrong Jasmine is thinking the Japanese girl would be submissive. I would also love to see the seniors have an orgy where they all use and dom the teachers.

Please write another instalment!

Jaz (couldn't resist)

Simply amazing from start to explosive finish. The intricate weave of story coupled with details about you is erotic nitroglycerin. The way you sublimely seduce me as a reader into the world of Chateau Johnson - I get the inside joke - and make me wonder where the real Jasmine ends and the story begins has had me in a high and constant state of arousal over the last two days as I have navigated all 11 sections. How the story echoes one of your consistent meta-themes of being introduced and initiated into a world, here signified by the she-male society, is a very nice touch. As the tale ended, I wanted to follow Jasmine's adventures with your students and fun with other teaching staff. I was waiting for a trip to DC and an encounter with the senator, among the halls of power. The long build up to the sex was exquisite torture, yet worth the wait, as I picked up on the many hints you left, starting with the title itself.

I freely admit some very nice naughty nighttime (I like alliteration, too) fantasies about you ranging from how you would look barefoot in jeans and a t-shirt, one of my personal faves, to being gob-smacked, pun intended, watching you on your knees orally obsessed with the cock in your mouth. As we both know, the brain is the most erogenous part of a human. Your writing continues to entertain, seduce and, of course, arouse me. Several of your stories have given me some "Hmm, I wonder . . " moments about new things to explore.

Please think some more about the BBC lifestyle story idea I mentioned. I know you would make it spectacular. Thanks for brightening, on a regular basis, my far too mundane life. You are a gem.

Your illustrated stories give a whole added dimension to my enjoyment of your work. Although you obviously know that Rebecca is an amazing artist, I feel compelled to mention it.Her style is exquisite. Please pass on my compliment. I have considered how superb an illustrated version of She-Male School would be.

Ciao!

another really great story will you continue this one , would great to read more

Please revisit this story and this school. This is my third time reading it and Jasmine's depravity is matched by Nicole and Alexis's dominant natures - and it is fantastic. Normally, I don't like excessively long stories, but the build up here was PERFECT for the story - rewarded with incredibly hot sex! Keep on writing, please!

The only way this story could be better is if it was illustrated. Perhaps next time!!!

This story is amazing. I love the detail the slow seduction and the incredibly hot sex. You truly have a gift for the written word.

There's submission along with love and respect in many of your storys l find that kind of sexy.