All Comments on 'It's Just Business'

Not bad, Tammy. Keep writing. I suppose it's sexist but I was hoping a hot babe like your character could get Steve to join our team, but, alas, 'twas not to be. Poor guy needs a cock in his butt to cum. I understand Salvatore Dali was like that. One criticism. Don't use the characters' names so much. We know you are talking about Steve or Karen so you don't have to repeat their names all the time. Use pronouns.

super, but end comment about climbing into her bed, there was only one to start with.