by Ashson
Great ending! Wouldn't the world be nicer if it always ended like this, when needed :-)
I'm pretty sure I wasn't supposed to laugh hysterically at the ending but it was brilliant and I didn't see it coming!
I did not see the end coming at all. You had my attention then it was good for a laugh.
Thanks for the twist!
I was really liking your story until the end. I was hoping they'd get married later.
... I thought it was a stroke story. I was wrong. Nice twist ending. Panther Fan.
I was SO hoping he wouldn't get away with it!! Thanks!!
As a woman who loves nonconsent stories this fell flat liked some of your other ones though. This whether you are a man or woman felt like a cheap pop.
I LOVED this ending! Beautifully done.
Long time reader, first time commenter.... This is awesome. Love it. 😂
At first, while reading this, I thought it was going to be a story of rape, of which I do not approve. The author has neatly converted the story into a parable encouraging morality. Full marks!