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tey another portion of cut & paste garbage

Since you still use racist, ethnic descriptors for everyone and refuse to learn how to write dialog, liet's just try one improvement in your writing:

Phrases like, "City of Toronto" or "City of Boston" do not require 'city' to be capitalized.

Well done. It's fashionable to be a 'knocker' on here but I like to offer a positive comment when I can. The nit picking about grammar aside, my thoughts are that you have sensitive writing but it didn't take us anywhere. You need more than a revelation of the nature of a few relationships to captivate an audience. I suggest you try and get a story skeleton together as a first step. Keep working at it.

The absolute worst on Lit, ever. No improvement over the years. Now, I cringe (and shrivel) whenever I see the "by Samuelx" tagline -- let alone actually trying to read the festering carcasses you try to pass off as stories. For the love of everything holy and unholy, *please* take up another hobby. You absolutely aren't cut out for writing .... whatever it is you think you're writing. Your words are to erotica as a stick in the eye is to opera. Have pity on us all. Go away.

Submitted this story in the nonsexual category. It's rambles on and its not erotic.