All Comments on 'soft rhythms'

by kokshur

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erectus123erectus123about 11 years ago
not your best work

sorry but I have seen you do better and will again, a lot of repetitive words (bare feet, feet bare,soft rhythm,) that lack excitement or purpose, give it too us hard, we can take it!

kokshurkokshurabout 11 years agoAuthor
rhythms

I have been working with repetitions of words and phrases, repeated rhythms. Most sexual acts involve repetition, rhythms, soft or hard. So repetitions will show up again and again, oh, fuck, i'm coming, oh, fuck, i'm coming!!!

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