by kokshur
sorry but I have seen you do better and will again, a lot of repetitive words (bare feet, feet bare,soft rhythm,) that lack excitement or purpose, give it too us hard, we can take it!
I have been working with repetitions of words and phrases, repeated rhythms. Most sexual acts involve repetition, rhythms, soft or hard. So repetitions will show up again and again, oh, fuck, i'm coming, oh, fuck, i'm coming!!!