All Comments on 'For the Pleasure of the Princess'

It would be interesting to read further of the story, for I think it has good potential.

A few minor niggles (probably due to auto-correct spelling) but a fine effort.

HP

Will there be a sequel? I thoroughly enjoyed this. (Y)

MORE PLEASE?

I enjoyed it very much would like to see a sequal could be a very good light sub/dom love story :) would very much enjoy reading more if you continue but now i think i have to go read some of your other stuff

what is a SEQUAL?

It's not in my dictionary.

I wrote this to see if I could write a good flash story. I have learned that they are not my forte'. So, soon I will be pulling this story down and giving it a full treatment and see if it is any better. I want to thank my readers for their support over the long period that I have been away from activly writing for this site. I have one story to post, then to rewrite this one, and then unfortunatly I will have to take another break in the real world of making money to put beans on the table. Thank you again.

Myhands316

HOW CAN YOU DO THAT?! please please please dont remove it!!!! I'll cry if you do!!!! please please!!!!!!! :'( this is me, a rare sight, on my knees begging you to leave it there... please.... please.... *breaks down into sobs*

please...

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:')

good, but seems can extend a bit

As requested I have left this here while I sort out a few things in my life. But unfortunately all too soon I will have to pull this down and finish it for publication. When I originally started this, it was in response to another story of the same genre that I was helping another author with. Ergo how it is incomplete. Yes it continues, being both loving and tragic, since I am looking at history for the story line. Please remember, "They lived happily ever after," is only in fairytales.

Thank you so much for reading my work, and as soon I know when and where I will be posting new stuff, I'll let you know.

Myhands316