Being Australian, mostly in SA, I enjoy your stories very much.
The "yeah, right" comment tells me that you also listen to ABC NewsRadio - I would love to find that Kel Richards' piece!
how the bank would sell it to Parsons when the Woods clan owns the bank. Given their history, I would suspect Edward would have been informed and increased his own low bid. Apart of that, entertaining story. The ending feels a bit rushed and could have been a bit more fleshed out, but still very good.
You certainly do good research for your stories. That makes all the difference. I got confused at the conversation about the painting of the grandparents. You might re-read that sometime and see what I mean. Good story as always.
Thanks for a wonderful story. Please keep up the good work. You are one of the authors that I follow! Love you bunches. alaskadude
just didn't quite get how he got it from the bank if the protagonist owned it - how come he didn't sell the land to himself....but otherwise a great tale of how he rubbed their faces in it - now he also has a claim on his fathers estate - hopefully his mother can now return with her head held high but there again she might want to stay where she has lived. But at least he got the girl who lived on the land...but she was no virgin so had she been putting it about in the town....but at least she gets to live back where she was brought up...a nice tale of the good guy beating the bad guy who had ruled the roost and ripped people off for too long...
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