by pulaski
I expected a little bit more at the end, but alas....
Most certainly not bad.
Aside from no illustration except a shower stall (huh? that's not sexy)...was hoping she would have backed her ass onto that soapy dick. Sounds like she certainly could have handled it.
This story is amazing! I love how their speech is written with a southern drawl. You're descriptions left enough room for the readers mind to create it's own images. The ending is a bit abrupt, but wonderful, nonetheless. I am impressed!
be a good chance this couple will live happily ever after.