All Comments on 'Falling For Aiden'

Moreee!!!

I like your writing, wishing you hadn't left the story on a total cliffhanger like that. I hope that there's more to it.

Like this start

Well it didn't take much effort for Aiden to convince her.

Great start but it needs to be a bit longer to keep the flow but other wise good work

Hope chapter two isn't too far behind.

looking for more.

though it's been a while since her incident, rape is really not something one gets over so that they do things like le ta stranger walk them home. And as for his "it wouldn't be rape" comment? Yeah, that would give off some serious alarm bells in her head to the point where she would have accepted the offer of a police escort or even better, take a taxi home instead. I like this story but just thought that whole exchange seemed rushed and disjointed from the first part of the story. I'd like to see where this goes.

Please post another part. I am so into this. I hope Aiden pounds the fuck out of her and make her abundant breasts bounce uncontrollably!

"I hope" that the author still has stories on line somewhere.

I remember reading this story years ago and was hoping that it would have been updated by now. Please come back and finish!