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Story was okay, but the dialogue was just broken. "flapping your goddamn uppity lips"? Ummm, yeah.
Another story
Can u please make another part to your holiday blackmail story.
Lucia is a lot like me
I also tend to talk too much, sometimes that can get us into trouble.... And sometimes "trouble" is what keeps life interesting. Haters will hate. I look forward to the next chapter.
Great story. I look forawrd to reading more, bet she dosent keep talking so much anymore.
Dialogue
I know its not about to win me a pulitzer prize, but whats so wrong with the dialogue? Maybe people you know have limited vocabularies? I'm always astounded how people with critiques never leave their name so you can ask them for clarification.
Very interesting...
Hello from a fellow Canadian (Ontario, to be precise). I enjoy your stories immensely and appreciate the induction of each scene, each character, and the intended action each of them takes.
I do have one request. Would you consider doing another audio story? Your last one is what initially brought me to favourite you as an author. Your voice, your literary lust, your delicious pronunciation... just perfect.
Resistance is Futile
Non-consent/Reluctance certainly isn't at the top of my preferred categories, but I can't resist reading any new Lucia story. Always a treat, luv.
hey it's Adam
I want to thank you again for using my idea Lucia, it's a real honor to read about fucking that hot mouth of yours ;)
Another Good'un
Thanks, Lucia, for another great story! In this genre you are the best!
Another fine tale my dear. Sorry for the delay in reading it, life cropped up. On to part two now. Keep writing and I will continue being your favorite fan. I hope one day you will write for me. Until then I remain...
Greetings
Hello again to Canada's finest fellatrix. How are you my dear? I miss trading BJ vignettes with you. Last time we left off, your talented pianist was paying for her cross country ride with her talented mouth. The big time music producer was starting to enjoy her submissiveness and willingness to improve her throat fucking skills. There might have even been a life changing audition waiting for her in Vegas. Mick was on the phone. Kneel down and email me darling. Don't keep a good man waiting.
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