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by luigithicket
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twelveooneabout 11 years agoyou just descripted your mushroom trip
but did you edit for effect
4ed, it is different, you are a new writer, but same advice, see other comments
HarryHillabout 11 years agoWell, I enjoyed it
liked this line "...a green paint brush squashed
into a bucket of blue." no vote though
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