All Comments on 'Binary Romance'

better, fun

Could I be your verse and you my meter?

is not a bad line, but here

my bits of you

in context, is poetry

Good rhymes, fairly good cadence, paints a cute picture. Thanks for sharing!

please keep on writin' such stuff !!

I also liked the line "Could I be your verse and you my meter?" although it seems to me it would be more effective as a statement rather tham a question. ie: I could be your verse and you my meter.

we all missed that. I refer readers to 'bing' binary systems as they relate to celestial mechanics and computer science. 5ed for depth

What an unusual concept: love in the ether. I suppose all love resides in the ether until supped upon by those under love's starry skies.