by SexySoul
what caught my eye:
I don't want to share
I want all the attention on me
now the poem, say what you want and get the fuck out, a little more edit, chop. think it though, now do these two lines fit the tone?
I want you to test me, trust I do
Believe me I won't leave your balls blue
why are they there?
when we would all get naked and fuck. Could we cuddle afterwards?
"as you give me brain" is a nice turn, it usually means to give head, i.e. fellatio, but here I take it to mean cunnilingus. Yes, loveless sex is good when the other is not available. Nice angry poem, go for it!