All Comments on 'In the Mood'

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ScrubberScrubberabout 11 years ago
I know...

...that feeling.

twelveoonetwelveooneabout 11 years ago
5ed

what caught my eye:

I don't want to share

I want all the attention on me

now the poem, say what you want and get the fuck out, a little more edit, chop. think it though, now do these two lines fit the tone?

I want you to test me, trust I do

Believe me I won't leave your balls blue

why are they there?

AmusedMusingsAmusedMusingsabout 11 years ago

Roses are red

Violets are blue

Feelings are messy

Let's just screw!

HarryHillHarryHillabout 11 years ago
Reminds me of my younger days

when we would all get naked and fuck. Could we cuddle afterwards?

erectus123erectus123about 11 years ago
i guess she is saying "I won't give you blue balls, with me you will cum quickly"

"as you give me brain" is a nice turn, it usually means to give head, i.e. fellatio, but here I take it to mean cunnilingus. Yes, loveless sex is good when the other is not available. Nice angry poem, go for it!

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