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by ArjayEiff

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SweetOblivionSweetOblivionabout 11 years ago
Nicely done

works well - good form - clever too.

Quivering_QuillQuivering_Quillabout 11 years ago
Nicely composed...

31 syllables, 5,7,5,7,7....... I enjoyed your poem and really like the last line in conclusion...... Very Clever.... Thanks for sharing...

HarryHillHarryHillabout 11 years ago

Well done, subtle, concise

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