All Comments on 'This Moment'

liked this. Thank you.

makes its point but here and there could be tightened, this theme seems to be overpowering, if reflective of author some council might be helpful, it is easy to be trapped and staid when relationship is not abusive. The "moment" concept is a valid one; however, often we live and relive past moments as well to counter present moments that are not as desired.

even easier to become trapped when a relationship is abusive (which seems counter-intuitive).

erectus is right, past moments give comfort when relived. some live in future moments as well.

nice

to make you stop and think and breathe out in awe - this is the heart of poetry and the emotional depth too - wow - superb. S.O.

This poem comes from the gut, some may say the soul. But either way it sounds like it was cathartic to write.

As I knew when I read your first poem, you can write, woman.

Five.

Amen

Feel your fingers on the keys

Your feet in your shoes

Your bottom in the chair

Because this is it, this is all there is...

Well,

Most of us humans, at some point of time, feel as you do and so beautifully narrate the feelings.

I am looking forward to read all your poems

Kinky

Picture of truth.