All Comments on 'The Chase'

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erectus123erectus123about 11 years ago
nice Harry

Except:

for a drink or two, a cheery fire

ere I retire to dream of you.

greenmountaineergreenmountaineerabout 11 years ago

I like this because it's concise but still has a nice snap to it. Agree with Erectus about the "cheery fire" and the "ere."

Ashesh9Ashesh9about 11 years ago
Harry Hunter , One

of your best ----5-ed .

demure101demure101about 11 years ago
Very nice -

Lots of posibilities, with facets I may well want to nick some day...

The cheery fire would be a dwindling campfire for me, I suppose.

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