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SweetOblivionabout 11 years agoAnother well structured pleasure
Like the butterfly,
Will you be the crushed insect,
once he has used you?
lonelyhousewife32about 11 years agoAuthorOnly time will tell
If the butterfly will fly
Or end in pieces
theognisabout 11 years ago*****
I just have to comment again. I have never read a more beautiful haiku than this one. I wish I could give it a ten.
oneiriaover 10 years agoA Master of Haiku
You are the master of the short poem. This one is also very beautiful.
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