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by lonelyhousewife32
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erectus123about 11 years agonicely done
love found at last?, a few extra words here and there might be cut, also "tis" is a little too Elizabethan is contrast to rest of language, but a very nice effort, message requires cyphering -5
HarryHillabout 11 years ago5ed... liked the layout, semi whispy
some good lines
liked this 'Will the whipping wipe the wonder from the world' and this 'and fantasies that come to me'
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