All Comments on 'The Reluctant Journey Ch. 05'

I'm all for a quick post and all, but as soon as I got into this chapter, it ended, and I'm a little peeved! Great writing and all that, but I'd rather wait an extra week or two for a bit more length.

Looking forward to the next installment, hoping for it to be a bit longer . Great story

That was so short :( I need more haha

What was she supposed to do? No, I'm Malia, but my sister Olivia is over there so you can take her instead. Cain isn't really thinking this through. . .

That said, I love this story, and I can't wait for the next chapter

Can't wait for the next installment.

To more of this story....

How's the next chapter coming along? Can't wait!

The next chapter is giving me troubles unfortunately. I've been super busy of late and haven't really had much chance to write. When I do the chapter taunts me, so I'm still figuring it out. :) Thanks for the interest though

This has the makings of a great story , stick with it. I am checking daily for your next chapter.

Any idea when the next chapter will be up?

How the next chapter is coming along.?

I am finishing it up now and it will be on the queue tonight. Thank you all for the continued interest and I hope the next chapter will be to your liking :)

Sooo excited for the next chapter. This story is so full of intrigue..can't wait to see what he does to malia. Even though he would have done the same thing for his brother xxx

When Cain gets back to the house it gonna be like two wet cats tied in a sack. Pig headed ubber man has to be pissy that he was bested by a girl, but at some point he'll get the 'anything for your family' aspect. (Just not too soon, lol)

Goodness gracious, girlfriend, your little tale has all of us greedy bee-otches stirred up, what with all the whining and moaning for more and longer (hummm, don't know if that came out right :D) I love the many irons in the fire. Malia will continue to be trouble. Her family is going to start something. Denizen is looking any chance to stick it to Cain. Tristan isn't on board with the plan. Not such a great time to be Cain.

I appreciate this story's new dynamic. The one thing I would like clarification on is why the hell he chose Olivia, or rather, any girl from that particular unit. Why a unit? Seems like a lot of trouble for fixing his brother up with someone---especially when he doesn't even know who that someone is. Maybe I missed something? This is an enjoyable series so far, I just hope everyone's questions get answered soon.

Lol shit got real...