by PenGwendolyn
Per say..... I enjoyed your poem and the implications that society (specifically morals from the religious sectors) have upon the conscious of women and to some extent men. Nicely done and thanks for sharing.
on rhyming couplets for start
parse this fragment
Body thirst for rapture of heavens ache
this is not real language - you are larding
depend more on this
render and reject as in
Covetous green eyes render and reject
and drop nonsense like Covetous (larding)
didn't vote