All Comments on 'Succubus Rising Ch. 01'

English is obviously not your first language ~ kitten is not the correct term for pussy when used in the sexual context, you need a better dictionary.

This is an interesting start to the story and even if I hadn't read your profile, it's clear that 'kitten' is just an affectation, and quite an endearing one as well.

I can't wait to see Sita evolves (litterally).

This is great. Real feeling characters and great description and iconic refs. Excellent ideas throughout. I liked the internal (psychological) stuff. The 'kitten' thing got a bit annoying, but that's nothing. Just switch it up with a different term maybe next chapter so it doesn't become too precious. I really hope you continue this.

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