All Comments on 'The Hike'

That was not "control" That was almost rape, even though you wrote it as "consentual"

Erotic asphyxiation-what is it with people flirting with death for an orgasm today? You tie her to a cliff and choke her. Another dude ties her to a track with an oncoming train. I'm gonna climb back in my fluffy warm bed and masturbate- alone. :D

The story put me there wanting to be Sarah.. It actually made me jealous and envious of her. I do hope my Dum someday well fulfill my fantasies and dreams with such care and detail. The writer has an excellent imagination or is very lucky to have lived The fantasy!! Excellent story!!!

To the first anonymous commenter, I really can't see this a rape in D/S relationship you can still say no, call red, or another safe word, had she safe worded and her master gone ahead anyway it would us e been assault/actual bodily harm and rape.

To the third poster I hope your Dom doesn't see your spelling, were I your domme calling me a Dum would get you more than spanked little one :D

To the writer,

Thank you for a well written piece, but when writing about a sadistic or a masochist please in future try to emphasize the mental torture us sadistslike to put our subs through, unless the pain your character likes is purely physical. Sadism is more than just physical pain, it's challenging your sub or slave past all there limits one step at a time. It's binding them and tickling them for hours, forced orgasms and orgasm denial, for days. It's humiliation, being made part of the furnishings. Personally I'm a sadist who struggles with inflicting extreme pain, however I'm very good at thinking up punishments where in the end my subs would rather have been lashed. Xx

My favorite of your collection! I loved each and every second of this one :)

I made my wife read this aloud as I fucked her naked flogger-welted body face down over the trestle. She screamed as she orgasmed with my cock pumping sperm deep into her cervix