I look forward to ur next chapter!!!
He plans to make her a demon doesn't he?
It certainly does seem that he would make her a demon. But that one could be seen coming.
I'm definitely dying to know what his plans are. But I don't think he plans to turn her into a demon...or at least not only that. Why would Rena be worried about losing him then? I think Tristan plans of making Celestine his mate! Whether that requires him to turn her into a demon or not, only more chapters will tell! All I can say is I'm still desperate to see Tristan and Celestine having sex WITHOUT Rena!!! I do really like her, but I just wanted Celestine to shove her out of the way in the last chapter...hand in her face, shove her right the hell off the bed and tell her to get lost! But I'm not into women or sharing. :-)
she is gonna become a deemon....rena is scared of losing her master to celestine
At least thats what i think.....
that I've saved because I'm looking forward to the next submission. Well written and looking forward to more!
The suspence t kills me! D:
I am so hooked on this story!
I love the depth of the characters! That's unusual for an erotic story, but pulls me into the actual story line further....
You may want to pull together this, and more stories, to be published at some point ;)
What's the secret?! I am totally in love with this story so far. I love the characters, I love the depth you give to it all. It just keeps getting better!
I hate reading women on women yet I'm actually enjoying this .You have a hero who is raping ,killing and just trashing away women in the worst way and I LIKE him !! ....real shrink material but brilliant !
I have to say I think both Tristan and Celestine are lying to themselves here. She thinks she should have resisted more against his power, but she's had trouble before when he was using a moderate amount of it, and this time he apparently used some concentrated super-beam that could have killed her, so it's no wonder she couldn't resist. Maybe she doesn't know it, which is very unfair on her, someone should tell her. And Tristan wanting to believe she would have fought if she didn't want it, when the beam was super-duper strong. Not buying it.
Rena is part of the story, sure, but she's around way too much, she's just always there, doing or saying something annoying that just makes the Celestine / Tristan thing less hot. Like trying to have sex with a toddler sitting between you. :)
I'm trying to like Tristan...just seems I can't. I guess I don't hate him, but for him being the "main" guy, he irritates me. Maybe I just don't understand where this is going? But, I do enjoy this story. For some reason I keep reading and reading...maybe you'll make me acquire a taste for him. Ya never know.
I made a mistake in my earlier comment...Although this chpt is very sweet, its the next one that I want to included in my top 10 chapters in this seriers...along side chapter 11 as well. Beautifully written as always.
i think Tristan is in love Celestian.. He isn't showing. He may be plannin' to make her a demon and keep her althroughout.. Rena really is sumtimes annyin' , actually I too wanted to see Tristan & Celestian 2gether having....... Will like it. Rena is now cute..m is sorry for but the show must continue.. Also widout Rena, story would might be boring.. Plz stop this woman over woman, its sometimes is "yaak".
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