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Violating Mommy Ch. 01

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous03/26/13

"I was busy staring at it, long and thick and perfect. It'd never seen anything so beautiful."

That's Dillon's mother gushing her love and admiration for her boy's big beautiful prick. This wasn't really a case of rape, just of the male, her boy, taking charge, meanwhile causing his mother's mommy-hole to drip like crazy. Dillon's a smart, funny, good-looking lad, and, like plenty of sons, he wants his mother to submit to his big stiff prick. Mom could have actually carried out her threat to bite down hard on her boy's monster cock, instead she lets Dillon blow his big young balls in her mouth and down her throat. More stories of mom and son messing around, please, from this gifted young author.

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by LordSlamdawgg03/26/13

Not quite up to author's previous platinum par : aka a surfeit of inspired & demented prehensile progeny preposterousness!

Vanilla Extract owns a Seth McFarlandish voice that parodies & celebrates the cliches of this genre. Yet writing convincingly in the female narrative voice escaped him in this effort.. This story seemed a little rote. The exploration of the pain/pleasure precipice was abbreviated in comparison to sterling, earlier stories. 

   Ben Affleck joked his fetish alternated between the Lolita & Oedipus complexes. I'm guessing V.E.'s primary passion seems to be rooted in the former . The clever verbal tricks and traps are not as abundant as in the past. Perhaps he doesn't love his mother enough or  too much ... depending on your point of view. ****

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by dutch51303/26/13

not bad

another good story keep writing .

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by Anonymous03/26/13

Best story I've read in a while!!!

Please follow up on this story soon. The non-consent/reluctance part was not so bad if you take into account that she really wanted to do what was done anyway. Mostly though, a very hot well written story that I would like to see the next installment of.

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by mysreader03/26/13

What a great story!

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by brosismom03/26/13

Greatish

We Need next chapter ASAP

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by digdaddyrich03/26/13

A very good start

Nicely done.

A very good storyline that has a ring of truth when reading it, because of the good character development.

Hope to see more soon.

Thanks for the read.

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by Anonymous03/26/13

Talent!

Excellent writing - very hot and a witty humor to it that you rarely find in these stories.

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by Anonymous03/27/13

Great story, Hope to see soon.

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by Anonymous03/27/13

I thought it deserved a H. Rather hot.

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by slimjojo03/27/13

i like it!!!!

please continue!!!

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by Littleprick03/29/13

Keep going

Very nice first chapter. I hope you have more surprise for us.

The aunt is also a good candidate to help Dillon cum. It would make his mother jealous.

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by Anonymous04/03/13

very good and please add the aunt for your next chapter

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by LAROC04/08/13

Good story !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Oh but we need more !!!!!!!!

This is a good start, now please finish it. It was a good read....thanks..........LAROC

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by Shysquirter04/08/13

Fun Story

Quite different but fun

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by Anonymous04/08/13

Outstanding story!!!

I wish I could have made my mom suck my cock like that!!! She did willingly =)

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by rightbank04/27/13

wrong category!

should be non consent

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by LedaAndTheSwan06/08/13

You

are the Tom Robbins of erotica.

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by goodwillmagic06/10/13

wrong/right category

While it was sexual contact between mother and son, she was just forced to give him a blowjob. She was just raped by her son so that puts in another category.

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by Anonymous06/11/13

what a mother fucker?

Raelly nice story. have crush on my own mom since i got my first hard on. this story is among the best stories i read. wow ! awsome story, jerked off twice while reading it. wanna do it with my mom too. please go for second part

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by salemwinchester06/29/13

Awesome!

I've only read ch.1 but I love this story. Super Duper.

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by chunks08/18/13

You guys are funny

"There was an element of non-consent so this should be in the non-consent category."

Yeah? I detected an element of incest as well. Author's choice.

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by Dutchers08/27/13

Sigh

You cant't rape the willing. She wanted it, she just didn't voice her opinion about it because it's 'wrong'. I don't really see this as rape/non-con.

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by Anonymous09/22/13

Vacuums are expensive

IT PROBABLY SHORT CIRCUTED AFTER YOU VIOLATED IT.
Possibly the funniest thing I have ever read. I cried. that entire part is great

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by Anonymous12/03/13

No, Dutchers

Its that kind of bullshit argument that leads to women getting raped, and then blamed for "leading men on", or that it doesn't count because "she wanted it". No means fucking no you retard, and that means even if a woman is dripping wet with her pussy an inch from your cock, if she says stop, you stop. This should be obvious to anyone with half a brain. What happened in this story is approaching rape territory, no matter how much she might secretly want it.

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by Anonymous12/04/13

Raped once, maybe OK.

I like non-consent stories but not repeated rape stories.

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by Anonymous12/08/13

Rape really!

I like sex stories probably better then watching porn. You get generally m ore time to enjoye it. I even like incest stories to a certain degree, as long as it remains a fantasy, but rape. If you get a hard on reading or writing rape stories, you should really consider having you head checked. Seriously. I would say the same thing as others said before me, Its poeple like you that consider rape as normal because you thing you got's send to woman. You retard NO MEANS FUCKING NO.

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by Anonymous12/15/13

Eat, eat, eat...

Ya know, lots of animals eat their young.

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by Anonymous01/05/14

If you don't fucking like it, LEAVE

Okay, I understand rape is a touchy subject, but honestly he/ she told you before you even read the first paragraph that there would be some non consensual shit in this story, if you knew you would get butt hurt then that's on you, you easily could've left and went to a story where there aren't any weird fetishes, if you could find one. Just because someone get's off to a certain thing, doesn't mean they're going to act upon it, you are truly an idiot for 1) Not leaving after reading the disclaimer, or completely ignoring it and 2) For being a bitch about it, IT'S A FICTION FUCKING STORY GET THE FUCK OVER IT OR LEAVE. Cunt

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by Anonymous02/02/14

GREAT STORY!!!

Loved it. Hopefully there's an ending where Mom/Son get together as lovers and fuck each other. Just remember folks, this is the internet, and it's not real. All you folks wanting to bash the writers for their story line, just remember, your mind is the erotic central system of your body. If you can't find fun/pleasure/force/or what ever your heart desires in your mind, then in my opinnion, you've lost all hope in knowing and understanding fantasy. If that is the case, you shouldn't be here reading these stories in the first place. Peace to all, and remember, have some fun and get over yourselves!!!!

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by Anonymous03/04/14

* * * *

In Chap 2, maybe Dillon could make Mommy preggo!

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by bigdaddyg12303/22/14

"Violating Mommy Ch. 01:" - Katie and Dillon - (Mother and Son)

The story is written with a lot of "tongue-in-cheek" and with the subtext of humor and levity! The text, context and theme are written on a higher level of exotic foreplay of the son's long time love of his mother Katie, and her son Dillon uses the opportunity and situation to "capture" his female "prey", even though the prey is his mother. He's an adolescent, horny, not a finesse-type of kid but his hormones are bubbling and his nuts hurt enough to crack on their own had he not gotten his--now his mother's favorite word--cock caught in the hose to her vaccum cleaner!

His mother Katie is consciously thinking the same thoughts that we readers are, that she wants to convince herself of her tepid reluctance to go along with his foreplay game with her son, and that it will exonerate her guilt when she does finally cave to his pursuits! She likes Dillon's advances, those thoughts she has of consummated incestual fucking with her son are only for her benefit, not for anyone else--except for her sister Jennifer, with whom she, Katie, cannot seem to keep her mouth shut. She wants him pursuing her, even somewhat aggressively to break her resistance. She is using her reluctance mechanizism as an invisible barrier to slow her son--not stop him (as she has numerous times confessed to herself)!! Her son Dillon "forced" her like a mother does with her child to get them to eat their peas and broccli--but no one shouts "child abuse"! So, no rape. Katie was not hurt nor abused (which I DO NOT CONDONE); she did not have her pussy nor clit chomped down on, as she did to Dillon's cock, although she DID warn him!

The writer should keep the story true and pure, mother and son incest, regardless to where the story leads them, Katie and son Dillon, in the long, slow progession of conjungal and eventual consummated love making. Keep the twosomes, threesomes, moresomes out of this mother and son scenario!! Dillon is in love with HIS mother ONLY, and does not fantasize about other girls! Katie will come (cum) around, reluctantly as all females do--unless they slap the shit out of the male!

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by happybeta05/03/14

Great story!

Had a touch of humor, and my dick was hard the whole time. What could be better?

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by Anonymous05/19/14

unbelievably funny

this was one of the most entertaining and funny stories i have ever read...the writer is very talented and his characters are so real ... i could understand how any and all of this could really happen... the mother is so very sweet and authentic... the son...so bumbling but so hormonal...and the sister....when she hears about this ... awwh shit!!!

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by Anonymous06/14/14

Doofy

I was just watching Scary Movie yesterday and Doofy had his cock in a vacuum too.

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by Anonymous10/14/14

*****

Funny, appealing characters. Nicely done. You can do this. Keep it up!

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