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by Anonymous

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by chytown03/26/13

Thanks For The Read***

Now go to Walmart and buy some bug spray.

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by Erotonaut03/26/13

Sounds like her boyfriend really isn't making the grade, in which case Andy has a clear green light.

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by m48gunner03/26/13

Not So Much

Not so much into cheating stories unless you add in consequences and tension created by the cheating being found out.

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by Lickideesplit03/26/13

I'm with M48gunner

I would classify this as Erotic Coupling, rather than LW. Her Hubby (or is she EVEN a wife?) has NO role in this tale! Her behavior does NOT seem to be influenced by any consideration of their relationship, whatever that might be!

2.7 = 3*

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by betrayedbylove03/27/13

Trash

The spider killer in this tale deserves one thing: PAINFUL DEATH. The cheating wife deserves two things: DIVORCE and AIDS

Just my opinion.

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by x_witless_x03/27/13

Gunner has a point. But...

it was quite the well written tale. I liked it. 4*

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by Anonymous01/23/14

not bad

not bad, not bad at all

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