All Comments on 'Spider'

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chytownchytownalmost 11 years ago
Thanks For The Read***

Now go to Walmart and buy some bug spray.

ErotonautErotonautalmost 11 years ago

Sounds like her boyfriend really isn't making the grade, in which case Andy has a clear green light.

m48gunnerm48gunneralmost 11 years ago
Not So Much

Not so much into cheating stories unless you add in consequences and tension created by the cheating being found out.

LickideesplitLickideesplitalmost 11 years ago
I'm with M48gunner

I would classify this as Erotic Coupling, rather than LW. Her Hubby (or is she EVEN a wife?) has NO role in this tale! Her behavior does NOT seem to be influenced by any consideration of their relationship, whatever that might be!

2.7 = 3*

betrayedbylovebetrayedbylovealmost 11 years ago
Trash

The spider killer in this tale deserves one thing: PAINFUL DEATH. The cheating wife deserves two things: DIVORCE and AIDS

Just my opinion.

x_witless_xx_witless_xalmost 11 years ago
Gunner has a point. But...

it was quite the well written tale. I liked it. 4*

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
not bad

not bad, not bad at all

ChrisTor22ChrisTor22almost 9 years ago
Very cute!!

Short, to the point and sweet......and I am sure spiders or other vermin will necessitate a return visit!! LOL

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