All Comments on 'Always the Seamstress Ch. 01'

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MizzButterflyeMizzButterflyeabout 11 years ago

Please continue this story. I think it's off to a great start!

fanticyfanticyabout 11 years ago
great start

really like it so far . hope you continue the story :)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Ditto

More, and longer!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
More please!

I really liked how things are beginning, looking forward to reading the rest of it.

PoisonlovePoisonloveabout 11 years ago
pretty good

up to next chapter

psych0817psych0817about 11 years ago
But...

This was a pretty good story, so I'll wait for the next chapter. But, the second paragraph was a little confusing. Just work on your clarity, other than that good work

twistedfairytwistedfairyabout 11 years ago
Great start.

Was rather short, but quite wonderful despite this. Certainly caught my interest. Look forward to reading more from you.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
more please

Please write more its a wonderfull story so far

RheamistressRheamistressabout 11 years ago

For some reason, I can't get the stars to click.. 5 stars, darlin'... I am looking forward to the next chapter.. :)

fefe428fefe428about 11 years ago
Broke my rule....

I usually won't read new authors that start with a first chapter....too many disappoint and don't bother finishing their stories. Nothing frustrates me more than getting into a story only to have it abandoned by its author, but if you promise to keep this one up, I promise I'll read all of it. You're off to a great start!!!

KiwiKingKiwiKingabout 11 years ago
5 Stars...

This was a great start to what I can already feel, will be an awesome story. Please write quickly. Looking forward to much, much more!

Nicci

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago

If it makes you write more, this is my comment,

write more please. 5* for further encouragement

MsTaylorMsTaylorabout 11 years ago
Great start!!

Can't wait to read more, she seems like a fire cracker!!

peachesgirlpeachesgirlabout 11 years ago
More please

I like your first chapter. I think you set the tone but left us yearning for that little bit more. I hope you post another chapter soon.

Irish_IndianIrish_Indianabout 11 years ago

Great start! Hope you add more soon, I'd very much like to see where this goes! :)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
May we have more, please!

Loved the start here. I really hope you continue on

roseloveroseloveabout 11 years ago
more. MORE. lol

This is a great beginning. Hopeful ill see ur next instalment up. XD fingers crossed.

browneyes213browneyes213about 11 years ago
MORE PLEASE :)

sounds sooooo good! interested in this story!

AbbieStarrAbbieStarrabout 11 years ago
Great Start

Can't wait to read more :)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago

Definitely more and soon please!! Love what u have written so far ... But its just a teaser to what could be a great story :)

Zodia195Zodia195about 11 years ago

Oh definitely want more. Be nice if you could describe Ruari though. I love how it's set in Ireland too hehe.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
More more more!

Oh please your just teasing with that begining hope to see alot more from you, your an excellent writer, but you must get a bit more detail in. It would be awesome to know a touch about your characters and i hope you do include it in the next installment if you write one.

fallenangel6fallenangel6about 11 years ago
more please

i think this could be good i agree with others some details about them all as you develop the story

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Fantastic

It's a promising start please continue.

AhzureDragonAhzureDragonabout 11 years ago
Teaser

That was barely more than a teaser and do hope you already have more writing as it would be nice to read a much longer section. Great Start.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
hurry hurry

please hurry, you have set the bait and i am hooked and wanting more

DecadentdessertDecadentdessertabout 11 years ago

Thanks for the teaser. Come on now, you know you got the goods and you have bated us well. Please CONTINUE!!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
I am number 28.

I think that answers the question as to whether or not people want more. Pretty please write more before the crowd gets restless and gathers upon your doorstep with torches (the nonbattery kind) blazing. But hay, no pressure!

EuphoriaSlam69EuphoriaSlam69about 11 years ago
Uh oh! Now you've done it!

You've created a rabid crowd for your writing!!! :) Better keep the wild things entertained at regular intervals! Great start! More please! Quickly now!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
yes obviously

write more this is worthy of my vote saying 5 of 5 plz need more lolz

GreenEyedKittenGreenEyedKittenabout 11 years ago
Please

Loved it!!!! Please more!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
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very nice more please

philibraphilibraabout 11 years ago
more

shows a lot of promise

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
More!!!

I would like to see you expand on this story, has lots of promise!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago

A cute little story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
MORE!!!

I really liked this story. Though it was short it was cute, and very well written. I hope you decide to expand on it, I think you could go a long way with this story. Good luck!

Littlecat76Littlecat76almost 11 years ago
Good start

Definitely like to see more!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago

PLEASE WRITE MORE!!!!!!!!

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