All Comments on 'Built For One Thing Ch. 2'
by G. H. Lawrence
- 90 Comments
Leon22almost 18 years agoI've been a huge fan of G. H. Lawrence's work for years now. Stories this intense and erotic are really hard to come by. Very few writers have his magnitude when it comes to discribing characters and situations.
If you can every find his other work titled "I Dare You" I recommend you read it. It's just as good as "Built For One Thing", if not better.
Lets all do our best to encourage G. H. Lawrence to come back and continue his stories!
Anonymousalmost 18 years agoThat was so fucking hot.I'm still amazed, I'd never cum that much in my life! Now... if anyone knows how to get spurts of cum off a keyboard, that information would be appreciated!
don87654almost 18 years agoIt would have been much more erotic if the Pill had not been mentioned and your mother and aunts had voiced a desire to have your baby even tho you might not have gotten pregnant.
Anonymousover 17 years agoAWESOME WRITING
JUST LOVED THE VOYEURISM AND AUNTIES AND MOM COMBO
NEEDED PART THREE
HOW ABOUT A HOT LITTLE EIGHTEEN YEAR OLD NEXT-DOOR NYMPHO
DROPING BY AND SUCKING SOME TIT'S/PUSSY AND WATCHING BOBBY JERLING OFF ON MOM'S FACE AND TIT'S
Anonymousover 16 years agoI would love to find one of the other stories he (she?) has written, like "I Dare You" - googled that one and found a few mentions but no links!!
Anonymousover 16 years agoSomething we've all fantisized about and only a few of us have realized. More chapters please!
Anonymousover 16 years agoIf you want to read "I Dare You" it is in the www.asstr.org archives. Search for alexismachine she posted it in 4 parts.
Anonymousover 16 years agothe best fucking story ever as I have always fantasized about incest...
Anonymousabout 16 years agoThis is a fantastic series. I was hard and wet many times. You should write another chapter for your many fans. Thanks for the stories! I hope I can find " I Dare You ".
Anonymousalmost 16 years agoIM SO HORNY GREATSTORY.NEED TO FUCK MY MOTHER NOW.SHES SO WETTT TOO.
Anonymousalmost 16 years agoOk came back to reread the stories only to find ch1 no longer here what happened to it or can it be reposted.
Anonymousover 15 years agoWell...at least what I imagine what Jill looks like while I stroking my cock:
http://www.gibson.rarecelebrities.co.uk/JoyceGibson01.jpg
If the link doesn't come through just Google Joyce Gibson. And yes, where is Chp 1 gone to? That was by far the best chp.
Anonymousover 15 years agoI will like to read the chapter 1, please can you post it gain o send it to me via email?
jmcybleo@hotmail.com
Anonymousover 15 years agohttp://www.literotica.com/storyxs/stories/bfot_i_977_e0.shtml
Yep theres chapter one... google goes a long way
oldwaynealmost 15 years agoThis was quite a tale! I'd like to find the whole story somewhere, but this was hot stuff. Thanks for your story.
ilivefor69over 14 years agoYour writing always gets me worked up. Fantastic imagery. What I wouldn't give to see the movie!!!
Anonymousover 14 years agoFinally found a super hot story. I would love to read ch.1. The women are just the way I love them.Please let me know when you produce the movie!Thank you for the great job.
Tony Strokesabout 14 years agoVery good story and sequel to "Extortion" which was equally good. Any chance we can get a copy of the novel you mentioned at the end of this chapter? Because I'd love to see more from you.
Anonymousabout 14 years agothe son was described as only 16...and i guess literotica had to enforce a policy of ONLY 18+ characters allowed...
Anonymousabout 14 years agoAny story that features hot sluts with huge tits that happen to be the mother and the aunts of a big cocked stud gets my vote! Bring it on.
Anonymousalmost 14 years agoYou have obviously been watching too many chepa, cheap porno films with the come all over me line.
The "CUM" shot is the invention of sleezy porn film makers during the 1960's to try and be sexy as up until that time all climaxes were in a hole.
Cum shote are neither sexy nor erotic. A good shot of cum leaking out of a well fucked hole is much more erotic unless your a complete sicxy.
Anonymousover 13 years agoChapter One can be found here:
http://www.literotica.com/storyxs/stories/bfot_i_977_e0.shtml
For some reason there is a 'hidden' archive with this, and other older stories, in it.
Anonymousover 12 years agoUse wayback machine carefully.
http://wayback.archive.org/web/query?q=type%3Aurlquery+requestexactscheme%3Ayes+url%3Ahttp%3A%2F%2Fwww.literotica.com%3A80%2Fstoryxs%2Fstories%2Fbfot_i_977_e0.shtml&count=20000&start_page=1
Copy and paste this into URL and go from there.
Anonymousover 12 years agohttp://www.asstr.org/files/Collections/Alt.Sex.Stories.Moderated/Year2004/48081
go here for part one of this extremely hot story
Anonymousover 12 years agoAnd why does he have to have a 10 inch dick? Grow up!
BetterEndingover 12 years agoIt does not seem like the father deserved to be cuckolded the way his is. That ruins the story for me. Even if she had kept to her guns about only fooling around while he was gone, it would have been a bit better.
As it is, how about exploring the consequences of him catching all of them in the next chapter? A reality check about choices in life would be good. Perhaps the wife and son could end up out on the street having to fend for themselves. You could then explore their love and lust under difficult circumstances.
The fact that she would now rather spend time with her son than her husband says that this marriage is over.
Anonymousover 12 years agoPart One on Literotica: http://literotica.com/storyxs/stories/bfot_i_977_e0.shtml
Rossini12over 12 years agoIf only it could be true! A trio of huge titted women would be most mens dream, aunts even better. Adult incest can certainly be fun. It is a good job it is fiction, because I doubt any man could fuck that long and hard and cum so much! Still, fun to fantasize about. I must read Part 1.
Anonymousover 12 years agoHi, I love this but I'm looking for part 1 and I'm wondering if there are any sequels, it seems you've left it in a weird place, just asking, but fucking hot too.
Gemini1766about 12 years agoMy issue with your stories, what took away one star is I can't stand it when people use grammar and spell checks but do not take the time to read their own work to ensure that the correct words were used, and not a word that doesn't fit but is spelled right and checks out grammatically.
Get into the habit of making sure you read your own work as if it were some other writer's work, and do it with an eye for flaws. One huge flaw I found between the two stories here. His cock was 12" in the other story and she couldn't take it; at least in the beginning. Then later if I recall, he shrank down to 10" and stayed that way. Inconsistencies are a terrible thing.
Other than that I enjoyed it. The "bukakke"* cum scenes bother some but others are turned on by them. *Bukakke is a Japanese term that got swiped by the US porn industry and its use here is not what it is in Japan.
Pay attention to details. Don't just say the room smelled of sex or fucking. Describe each woman's scent, the smell of his semen, how his mother was cleaned up afterward, as I imagine it was all three women licking and gobbling it down, which is not all that likely as semen does not have a naturally inviting smell or taste to it. Few women actually enjoy the taste of a man's semen. That's something to consider. There are ways to make it taste better; eating cinnamon filled jell pills is one I've heard of, changes in diets may affect it, but typically semen tastes a lot like bleach.
Keep on writing, just work on better descriptions and less on size and such. Make the story come alive. And as someone pointed out no male cums like you describe, period. The average amount of semen from one male orgasm is about one tablespoon. Unless you've gone a week or more without organisming, then it can be a bit more, almost double. Know your facts, it makes the stories more realistic.
Anonymousover 11 years agohttp://www.asexstories.com/Built-for-One-Thing/index.html
God bless Google!!
Anonymousover 11 years agoa voluptuous mother's wet cunt and her big strong boy's big stiff prick. That's what happens in this excellent story of hot motherfucking by a highly talented writer. It's common knowledge that the best pussy any guy'll ever have is the one he came out of. A mother's cunt is the receptacle nature provides for her boy to unload his hot young balls, over and over again. A boy fucks the shit out of his mom, she cums like crazy, her son blows his balls up between her legs. Then mother and son gently kiss and smile at each other, the boy's fat prick still buried in his mom's cunt.
travel2cuabout 11 years agoIn your first story he is 12 inches and in this story he is a huge 10 inches. He isn't as huge as he use to be. He got smaller and his mom got bigger......
The story is great I just enjoy a series when those details match.
Anonymousabout 11 years agohere's the link for chapter 1
http://www.literotica.com/storyxs/stories/bfot_i_977_e0.shtml
writerjabalmost 11 years agomen always write about huge titted women and giant cocked me ... ho hum
Anonymousalmost 11 years agoIt's amazing how ppl don't read. This story is NOT a sequel to Extortion. So his size and her size don't change from Part 1. Also, her having GF boobs would not make her fat. There is a member on this site who says in her bio that she has 40FF boobs and she includes a pic.
http://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=1188350
Here's the link. She isn't fat. She is actually close to the body I pictured for Bobby's mom.
Anonymousalmost 11 years agoI think you meant FF boobs. Not GF boobs. Thanks for the link. That bitch is smoking!!
johnstang2over 10 years agohttp://www.asstr.org/files/Collections/Alt.Sex.Stories.Moderated/Year2004/48081
It is super hot. One of the best stories I have ever read.
Woodtoolabout 10 years agoGood story and writing. I write too, so you may want to take a look at one of mine. Somehow the theme of mature women with a young man is what does it for me,
hungereralmost 10 years agoPart 1 - which is also super-hot - can be found at:
http://www.literotica.com/storyxs/stories/bfot_i_977_e0.shtml
Anonymousover 9 years agoNote: (https) address for part 1: https://www.literotica.com/storyxs/stories/bfot_i_977_e0.shtml
Anonymousover 9 years agoAs of October 15, 2014, all of the links mentioned in the comments do not go to the stories. The full "Built For One Thing" and "I Dare You" can be found on:
http://chesttalk2.blogspot.com/
Wesafftonover 9 years agoAs of January 6, 2015, all of the links mentioned in the comments do not go to the stories. The full "Built For One Thing" and "I Dare You" can be found on:
http://chesttalk2.blogspot.com/2011/09/built-for-one-thing-chapters-1-and-2.html
http://chesttalk2.blogspot.com/2011/09/i-dare-you-chapters-1-and-2.html
Wesafftonover 9 years agoYou have to go to September 2011 is where both are listed
http://chesttalk2.blogspot.com/2011_09_01_archive.html
Anonymousover 8 years agoI'm a breast man, and these gals definitely got them! Bobby's aunts tits are more my style, I'm sure his mom's are magnificent, but they're a little large for me. Four people together seems a little crowed, but it's good for the story though. I'd rather take turns with each of them in the bedroom individually. I like the intimacy between two people pleasing each other, but I'd definitely do them all!!!
Anonymousabout 8 years agoChapter 1 can be found here: https://www.literotica.com/storyxs/stories/bfot_i_977_e0.shtml
Turtle1952about 7 years agomonster tits and ginormous cock makes for a great tale. Please keep going
MightyHornyalmost 7 years agoIt's a goddamn shame Literotica took out Ch. 1 - the buildup to their relationship is just as, if not hotter than the conclusion here.
Do yourself a favor and google it, if you haven't read it yet - it's available pretty much everywhere.
monicablualmost 7 years agoLit's policy, as previously mentioned above, regarding underage sex is understandable when viewed through a legal lens.
As many here know, our years of sexual discovery occur well before we turn eighteen. Too bad we have to hide behind a legal banner; those early years are exactly when some of the most erotic experiences occur, and we have to fudge the age on paper in order to tell the story. I'm sure many, like mine, involved beautiful relationships where we learned to love, and yes, please others, as well as ourselves.
Monica
Anonymousabout 6 years agoBuilt For One Thing
https://www.literotica.com/storyxs/authpages/977_auth.shtml
Anonymousalmost 6 years agoWhat does your comment have to do with this story? If you are referring to the age limits here at Lit - that's the rules of the site.
Anonymousalmost 6 years agoThere is one point in the story when a supposed enormous set of tits are referred to as large peaches, cantaloupes and melons (types not mentioned). Where are a jet fighter's drop tanks? Be consistent. Why keep referring over and over to the size of the breasts? Or, the boy's penis?
I began my sexual adventures in the early '50s, and never head any girl/woman constantly referring to size, as this story and others pretend is something of a norm (and no, I am not undersized). Is the author trying to cover up short comings?
Anonymousalmost 6 years agoWell this is all well and good
But what happened to the First Chapter?
Anonymousabout 5 years agoI had a hard till picturing the mother in the story just because of all the different descriptors used for her breasts. There seemed to be no consistency at all. Using the average size of the biggest and smallest objects the author uses I did the math. Her breasts vary in size from roughly 450 cc to over 7,400 cc depending on the object. 450 cc is slightly smaller than an American B cup in a 36 inch band. 7400 cc is enormous. Twice the size of an American N cup in the same band size. At that size her breasts would weigh over 60 pounds. Even if she was 6 feet tall and slightly overweight that would be nearly a third of her total body weight.
Anonymousalmost 5 years agoAnd thats when i looked over my shoulder and saw my dad his tiny wee wee in between 2 fingers face ashen and sweating... "Charles!!!" We all cried out as he colappsed and convulsed on thefloor. His face a deathly palour and his breathing so shallow we thought he was dead....
tobytimover 4 years agoVery entertaining and erotic reading, loved it, fuck the critics,. bit of fantasy with the sizes but who cares, I loved it and it turned.me on
exhultantover 4 years agoThis is the best event between a highly charged young adult & his beautiful Mom.
There has never been another family sex activity like these described here.
Anonymousover 4 years agoNow that my friends is how you right erotica! A shame the author didn't write more in his time. Anyone else able to recommend some other top quality stories similar to this? The only one I've found to come close so far is 'Sins of my Stepmother' on Amazon.
Anonymousabout 4 years agoWonderful story, and glad to see you were able to bring Mom's both younger sisters into the action Scene together, Just wonderful,Tthanx for the Read, after all these years.
Anonymousover 3 years agoI second the comment about Sins from my Stepmother. just read it and very hot. nobody beats G.H. Lawrence though. this story is a classic for the ages.
Jimmcdover 3 years agoI really got so horned up reading this and G.H's other incestuous tales. So well written and so descriptive. When I was young I never had any sexual desire for my own mum but since reading his adventures I now fantasize that I am fucking my own mother while I shag my wife. She is course knows nothing about my dark thoughts but she has noticed that I have got more lusty and much harder since my fantasies began.
LegallySaneabout 3 years agoto read ch. 2 hoping it would be as good or better than ch. 1 but as so many stories on here go it wasn't even close. Got really tired of his mom talking about her breasts etc. etc. and etc. She needed to shut the fuck up. Quit reading in the middle of pg. 2. Another story that should have stopped on ch.1.
Anonymousalmost 3 years agoDoes anyone know where I can find Sins from my Stepmother for free? I'm assuming its the one by CRR Crawford?
Anonymousover 2 years agoLots of perspectives to enjoy the stories on Literotica. If you just want HOT, this author in in my top five. Plausibility doesn't seem tooo much a stretch if the action is what you're looking for (how many read here seeking reality). Punctuation, flow, vocabulary, granularity, all well above the basement of what's offered on this site. Would be nice if the author had done more work.
Anonymous9 months agoAbsolutely fabulous, I absolutely adore Cunt in every way possible especially when I am eating one and fucking another, sometimes fingering a third. I never get enough cunt, the more I get the more I want. Cunt crazed fucker, Lancashire, UK.
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