All Comments on 'A Coincidence of Wants Ch. 02'

Excellent!

Hope there is a Chapter 3!

This is very good on all counts: very well written and excellent story line. Please give us more soon. Thanks.

What an incredible story, incest romance should be a separate category and hugely popular, thanks for the awesome read honey. I honestly believe there's nothing wrong with it as long as both are consenting adults. Please continue.

Great job! Really enjoyed it. If you'd said that he saw the top of the garter belt when he was zipping her up I woulda splooged all over the place lol

I encourage you to continue writing stories, especially with voyeuristic lead ups to the main action.

Well done.

Had a very minor typo. "You made me. You held me inside you for 10 months." Last time I checked gestation for humans is 38 to 42 months or average about 9 months and maybe a few days. BUT, having said that, the rest of this story has been superb! I know, gotta be a stickler in every crowd.

and just had to chuckle. "...38 to 42 months" for normal human gestation?

they didn't fuck

10 month gestation

Poor woman

how you write this story

mom son never do sex this a sin

mom son between only respect but not love

you make love other women why your mother she is a your god

I greatly enjoy the romantic, emotional and erotic development of the characters. I find myself often wishing that the story is factual instead of fiction and that the characters are real. I would like to believe that the love between characters in the story actually exists somewhere.