All Comments on 'Letting Go'

by Quivering_Quill

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HarryHillHarryHillabout 11 years ago
Not bad

except for tourette's rhyming with etcetera (possibly) enjoyed it

Quivering_QuillQuivering_Quillabout 11 years agoAuthor
Thanks Harry...

I certainly F'd up on that stanza.... That's what I get for not putting it away and coming back to it.... Thanks, I will correct the original. QQ

erectus123erectus123about 11 years ago
i didn't mind ect with tourettes

very creative, or just forget rhyme and drop etc. this is an example of how nicely you do when there is no pretense of being poetic, well done, descriptive content very good

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