All Comments on 'Come See the Game'

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njlaurennjlaurenalmost 11 years ago
So so

Among other things,if you are going to write an American story check on US wording.No american would say 'after we quarter time' they would sat 'at the end of the first quarter'.Likewise the wouldn't be 'irked',she would be pissed. This also lacked emotions,Jasmine isnt exactly on fire,so why does she let him sctew her?If this is to be a longer story,put chapters on it...

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
So now we now

Jasmine is just a cheap gutter slut.

Eddy is either in denial or a happy WACC

Nobody seems to respect Eddy even a little.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Liked It

But what a shit friend he turned out to be.

betrayedbylovebetrayedbylovealmost 11 years ago
Disgusting

What a great wife and what a great friend. Just kill yourself.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Entertaining

A fresh approach to a hot wife tale (tail). Love the confidence of the hero, calling her bluff, ordering her to submit, knowing that behind the respectable front evey wife wants to feel a different cock in her. A real man and a real woman having fun. 5*****

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Lucky

Lucky she's not my wife and lucky I found out that this hot looking broad was game for a revenge fuck whenever she was mad at the fool that married her.

Takes all kinds!

Cum to think about it, I could make her my secret and private slut, damn - life is good!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
>betrayedbylove

No, the husband was doing fine in his rec room. Beat the shit out of the "friend" and kick the bitch to the curb.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
flash story

a good flash story and ignore the trolls

LickideesplitLickideesplitalmost 11 years ago
Good flash

A good little bold flash story of a flash fuck. Hot! I expect she comes downstairs!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Ridiculous

In any case, the "trolls" are correct in deriding this tale.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Any guy put his hands on my wife or threatens her because

She is being "rude and obnoxious" will get a beat down from me. It's her house too and if she doesn't like having my friends over, that's her choice. She has every right to expect civility from my guests,if they don't like it then there's the door and don't let it hit you on the ass on the way out.

chytownchytownalmost 11 years ago
Dream On***

My women would have bust a cap in your ass. Thanks for sharing.

MinigalesMinigalesalmost 11 years ago
RE: Any guy put his hands on my wife or threatens her because

@Anonymous

It is funny that you think because it is your house, your wife has the right to be rude and your guests have to put up with that. Just tell them not to visit, or you have to respect them.

betrayedbylovebetrayedbylovealmost 11 years ago
@anonymous

I get what you're saying but my comment was meant for the author.

HA HA HA HA HA

C_frommnC_frommnalmost 11 years ago
RE: Any guy put his hands on my wife or threatens her because

You sound like a "wimp" if your woman acts like an Idiot and you dont stop it PPL will just stop coming to your place and pretty soon you will be watching the "game" by yourself.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
I liked it.

Infidelity is not a turn-on for me. But, who hasn't fantasized about doing his buddy's wife? That's all this was. And, I thought it was well done. Kind of a Mexican stand-off seduction. Pretty hot little story.

johnny1705johnny1705over 10 years ago
The rest?

What about the rest of the guys? Shouldn't they all have a turn?

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Damn that was fun..

.....hope Eddy has me over for the next game!

5***** tom anon

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Yip

Written by a true cum dump slut. Hubby would have been up checking after five minutes.

dark2donut2dark2donut2about 5 years ago
Good enough to figure out I don't need to read any more garbage

from this writer. 1 star.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
That's the way to handle a bitchy wife

Brings back memories.

JBEdwardsJBEdwardsalmost 4 years ago

Very enjoyable read. Thank you!

vickitvohiovickitvohioalmost 4 years ago
really?

this piece of crap is a LOVING WIVES story?!?

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

What's so enjoyable about coercing someone into sex?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Uh Huh, got lotsa female commenters for this tale. LP

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