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two unrelated pieces. Kitchen Detente did not move me, whereas The Question I like very much. It's simple and easy and true. Poetry that has solid honesty without frills can be a very good thing imo. So it's a five but I'm only scoring on the second poem!

Sworn enemies , Harry ?! A refreshin' look at the Kitchen ! Liked both the poems ---A-9

Way to go Harry. I almost missed this gem. So poignant, and full of feeling. Your #1 fan. Ir2r

a refreshing look on things - moist and dry, and poignant!

there is play in the title, there is play in the juxtaposition, this seeming simplicity is much more complex, and in context this throwaway line "I'm empty and oh so blue", even shines, 5ed, you are hitting your stride.

PS I'm glad I waded through the chaff