All Comments on 'Pirate Days'

by Jasmynn_Brown

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SW_MO_HermitSW_MO_Hermitabout 11 years ago
Twisted

Every time I thought I knew where this story was going it twisted off on another tangent. Well written. Loved the analogies and explanations of the driving force for sex and love. I especially enjoyed finding out Randi and Dawna managed to stay true to their husbands and that Ken was true to Dawna. As the story progressed I found myself liking Randi more and more. I also found myself alternating between hating and admiring Dawna as she fought her desire to bed Dan. Well written and thought out stories like this are few and far between. I would like to meet a real life Randi.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Great Work

Honest to the core, and a reality seldom seen on this site and in this genre.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Lyrical, Sexy, Literate

Great story, compelling, interesting, brilliantly written. Thanks

Jasmynn_BrownJasmynn_Brownalmost 11 years agoAuthor
Thank you for your kind words!

Thank you for your kind words!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Excellent story with fine insights.

I enjoyed this story greatly.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Wow

Though short it looks more like a novel and the illustraritions are just Wow.

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