All Comments on 'Feral Heart'

by slyc_willie

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Gamergirl10Gamergirl10about 11 years ago

I loved it so much! You weaved such a fantastic tale, not just about Earth Day and honoring Mother Nature, but about a man finding himself--his real self.

It was suspenseful at times, but loving and sexy too. I think you did such a great job, and I wish you the best of luck in the competition.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
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amazing from start to finish i really enjoyed reading this story you are a very talented writer

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Outstanding

Mate what a fabulous story. Great word usage and craftsmanship.

jpb531jpb531about 11 years ago
Excellent

Great story. Well written. Keep up the great work. Thanks for sharing your words.

chocolatecookie3chocolatecookie3about 11 years ago
Good Overall

I liked it and I learned some new words! Very engaging. But I didn't care for the dialogue during the fight. It was kind of cheesy, but I was so into it I didn't mind!

kuroukiphoenyxkuroukiphoenyxabout 11 years ago

Holy WOW WHAT A STORY! Totally didnt expect that!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
wow what a story !!!!

very nice read ..........wonderfully delightful

Stephen J

southernmisfitsouthernmisfitalmost 11 years ago

Nice Sunday afternoon read, well written, with an interesting plot and good characters.

Thank you!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Thanks Slyc.

I often don't care much for your stories. Not that they are poorly written or poorly told; just that I am not a fan of a lot of your material. I am a little bit of a wuss, and I like stories to be nice and to have nice endings. I am also a Viet Nam vet who suffers from PTSD. I like women, a lot, and I don't like them to be mistreated even in stories. I don't like revenge and I don't like disparaging remarks. My dislike for your stories comes from all of my nice nice nice needs :) THIS ONE I LIKED, LOTS :) Lynn

JohnSpiritWolfJohnSpiritWolfalmost 10 years ago
One hell of a story...

I have read many different stories on here and about Were or Fae... This is one of the most entreating and endearing that I have had the pleasure of reading... I also am one of those old Vets...

Bright Blessings to You & Yours...

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Odd

I find myself conflicted. While there was a lot to like about the story, I couldn't give it a decent score. I decided not to rate it at all because in the end it wasn't a bad story, just not my kind of story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago

Slyc_willie - you tell the best tales n it's not only the sex that makes me a Fan, n keeps me coming back for more - well done, old boy !!! Your stories are pretty good too !!! - I'll be visiting again !!!

YUKIMI

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Well done. It would still have been a good story without the sex.

LovesDancingLovesDancing4 months ago

A well told story. It's curious, but as I've read more and more of the stories in Literotica I've come to appreciate the story being told and the sexual content less so. There's only so many ways you can describe the erotic intercourse between two people (or multiple people, or etc, etc.) but how they got there is deliciously imaginative.

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