All Comments on 'Forbidden Ch. 01'

Loved it. Can't wait for the next chapter

"He grabbed a fistful of the cotton at her shoulders" Cotton was common around places like Egypt, India, and Asia, but uncommon in Northern Europe, the British Aisles, and Scandinavia. Linen (from the flax plant) was what was used more often.

I hope I don't have to wait too long for the next chapter. I am hooked

For your comment on cotton. I do realize this as i have done research into it since. Cotton shifts weren't that common, but being that she is from a privileged background, where her father has dibs in far too many things at once! while the story will later explain for you, i thought it could be excusable. I am no historian! lol, and i have no intentions of coming across that i am, but i have a love of story telling, and this story is by no means factual. The objects within it is simply to add richness to the development, and to make it semi believable. Thank you for reading, and thank you for your comments.

I can't wait to find out what happens next!

this is great! I was sad to see that there was no second chapter, but then I saw it's a new story. Can't wait for the next chapter!

Loved it and I'm of to read the next chapter.

Thanks it was amazing.

What happens next? How soon before another chapter is written? I enjoyed the story and hope the girl's family does not get spared after all. Allow the girl to watch her family be punished, as she has been punished all those years. Please write more. Thanks!

very cinderellla-esc I am intrigued as to where this is going

Thanks for sharing

We'll see how this develops.

Do not bother reading further. This bitch of an author abandoned the readers on the site after getting them absorbed in her story -- without even a word of apology. See that it is now published online. Would not even consider buying the book by this self-serving, conniving bitch. Would recommend that other readers on this site do not either.

What happened to thhe book? Can't find it anywhere online.

@Horseman68 don't you think that's a rather harsh word to use? Do you comment like that of male authors with unfinished stories? I'm surprised your comment was approved by a moderator. There are many reasons why authors don't finish stories. Yeah it sucks but calling one out of her name isn't necessary.