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SweetOblivionSweetOblivionalmost 11 years ago
more prose than poem

but still a nice capture. S.O.

AngelineAngelinealmost 11 years ago
Like this a lot

but I think in the piece the form works against the content somewhat because there are great lines like this one: "I heard once that penguins mate for life no matter because there is nothing in the world worse than a flightless bird." that get lost in the text. I'm guessing you prefer this kind of shaping and if so, you could still make the key lines stand out by cutting carefully what is around them. Just my opinion, but overall a poem full of action and disjointed jumpiness that grabs the reader.

TrixareforkidsTrixareforkidsalmost 10 years ago
Cursed with memory

Indeed! I've been saying for years that happiness is a selective memory.

Here though there is beauty in the pain.

tazz317tazz317over 9 years ago
A RAMBLING SEQUENCE

far from the asylum of thought. TK U MLJ LV NV

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Single female writer. Most of my work is an effort to unlock my true self from the trauma of a lifetime of violent experiences, both sexual and nonsexual. I enjoy using the prose poetry style but have been known to venture from and to form and category. I enjoy reading comment...

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