All Comments on 'Kenny and His Cousins Ch. 01'

The characters seem human, the dialogue believable. Great stuff. Obviously you didn't mean to copy and paste the story for us, but I can forgive a simple mistake like that. It's less distracting than typos throughout anyway.

That looks like the beginning of a story. Go on!

I only see it listed here once. My guess it that Literotica screwed up and then corrected their mistake, but not before you saw it.

Gary,

I'm getting two identical copies of the story. You're off to a great start, but maybe repeating yourself isn't necessary; I got it the first time. ;>) (Just kidding.)

I just checked the original file I'd sent Literotica: everything was fine, so I can't figure out where the glitch occurred. I just re-named and resubmitted the file, so hopefully the correct version will be live in a few days.

Also, I submitted the second and third chapters a few days ago, so they should be going live very soon. The fourth chapter is almost done.

This story should definitely keep going

Please finish the story.

Or have a chapter 2